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moldygrape β€” harsh awakening
Published: 2004-07-06 06:34:09 +0000 UTC; Views: 46; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 10
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Description Flying up into the night sky
With only the clothes on my back
And my thoughts
To get me by

Soaring past the stars
I find you floating
Waiting for me
And together we soar back down
Past the city lights
And into our own place
Alone
Isolated from the obnoxious world as we know it

Together we live
Raising our children
Surviving out here
We need no one but each other
Away from civilization
We are truly at peace
So completely perfect

But then I realize
It’s only a dream
Nothing can be perfect
Slowly this melts away
Slapping me awake
And into this reality we call life
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Comments: 18

RainAgain [2004-07-18 22:26:15 +0000 UTC]

hmm very interesting. i like it alot.

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moldygrape In reply to RainAgain [2004-07-18 22:28:16 +0000 UTC]

thanks

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DarkRockFaerie [2004-07-11 12:02:28 +0000 UTC]

Ooh, I love it, shame its only a dream though

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moldygrape In reply to DarkRockFaerie [2004-07-17 05:46:55 +0000 UTC]

mm yes...

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MoonlitShadow [2004-07-07 14:39:02 +0000 UTC]

wondeful. his work also inspires me.

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moldygrape In reply to MoonlitShadow [2004-07-17 05:41:24 +0000 UTC]

he's quite good...

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subtlenuances [2004-07-07 07:18:32 +0000 UTC]

This is awesome!

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moldygrape In reply to subtlenuances [2004-07-17 05:32:21 +0000 UTC]

thanks!

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Jack-O [2004-07-06 18:46:20 +0000 UTC]

hmmm....you want children already?
jkjkjkjkjkjkkjkguysjkjkjkjk

good poem BTW

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moldygrape In reply to Jack-O [2004-07-06 18:48:56 +0000 UTC]

ahahaha! children!

sry, i cant stand kids.

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mutexvoice In reply to moldygrape [2004-07-06 23:46:05 +0000 UTC]

hehe...can't stand kids....for some reason that sounds so familiar...*thinks*..

nice poem BTW..

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moldygrape In reply to mutexvoice [2004-07-17 05:01:34 +0000 UTC]

kids are so a-fucking-noyying. never gonna have any. thanks, tho

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Jack-O In reply to moldygrape [2004-07-06 18:49:54 +0000 UTC]

teehee children are mini people...that is what they is wheee i'm talking out of my ass

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moldygrape In reply to Jack-O [2004-07-06 18:52:06 +0000 UTC]

again?? what have i said about talkin out ur ass young lady?? *taps foot impatiently*

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jahg [2004-07-06 15:21:22 +0000 UTC]

You can keep your harsh awakening, I'm in love with these lines:

"Soaring past the stars
I find you floating
Waiting for me"

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moldygrape In reply to jahg [2004-07-06 15:23:07 +0000 UTC]

yay he likes it!

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mistresskiya [2004-07-06 06:36:53 +0000 UTC]

Wake up! j/k Nothing is perfect. Good line. But it can be when you're sleepin..so go back to bed. That's my motto. I used to not have a motto...now I got that one. Thanks for giving me a motto.

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moldygrape In reply to mistresskiya [2004-07-06 13:27:03 +0000 UTC]

lol, ur welcome

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