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Published: 2004-06-13 07:55:07 +0000 UTC; Views: 37; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 7
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walking alonethe leaves crackle
driving me crazy
a breeze whispers
as it passes through me
laughing in my face
making me trudge
harder
faster
the trees
are soon behind me
and i sigh with relief
i'm standing
at the edge
looking down into the churning
freezing waters below
dare i jump
and never go back?
i could turn around
and head back
no one would notice i was gone
i glance over my shoulder
no
and then i jump
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Comments: 6
I am so dumb. I thought you were talking about your fear of jumping in a pool. Damn, lol, how dumb am I at this moment? I am obviously not paying enough attention. Well now i am just out of the loop. Damn, maybe I am not fully awake.
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lol, are you on crack?? heh, jk. yah, sounds like ur in need of sleep, my friend ^^
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Oooh-thats sad. I hate being lonely. I love the imagery you use. Suicide is a very terrible thing indeed. I was close to that like a year ago when everything hit the fan then realized suicide is only a permanant solution to a temporary problem and its the cowards way out.
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yah. i know what you mean. if i did actually kill myself and everything, i know it would evistate my family...i love them all, even if they're majorly fucked up.
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Yeah, killing yourself is definintely not the way to go.
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tis very sad, but you have to realize that mroe people would miss you than you think. if you did jump...they would never have a chance to show it to you...as to making you smile. i have no idea...
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