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moldygrape — me?
Published: 2004-06-02 22:56:03 +0000 UTC; Views: 30; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 7
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i know you hatemy shoes
i know you hate
my clothes
i know you hate
my attitude
i know you hate
my angry eyes
i know you hate
my room
i know you hate
my in general
and that makes me smile
because i'm not like you
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Comments: 10
I like the way this poem ends. Like a metaphorical middle finger to whoever you are talking to.
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wouldn't it be "i know you hate me in general? sorry...it's just....well anyways I like this poem really... i wish you had put more of a description behind it though, it kinda leaves you hanging...are you talking about one person (who hates you), a group of people, or just everyone in general? good job moldygrape 
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i donno. it's up to you i guess. i dont put too much behind my poems cuz i want other people to go, "oh, this is how it's like for me i guess" or something.
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oh...i was just saying that what they call "proper" english would be to say me...instead of my.
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i dont care. i'll talk how i wanna.
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i know i really don't care either...but i was just saying (bleck...get the shrinks and the english teacher outta my head)
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