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Published: 2004-06-24 02:09:52 +0000 UTC; Views: 21; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 3
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I’m fed upwith all your shit
your fucking attitude
makes me so angry
finally the time has come
you have pushed me too far
the morning sky
is a deep ruby red
I smile
it’s a sign
it will happen today
I slip the knife
into its silver cover
I don’t want to hurt myself
only you
quickly I hide it
in my long, black coat
and I’m out the door
ready to hunt you down
you may think I’m crazy
why should I do this?
this voice in my head
you gave me this voice
I don’t want it
It’s all your fault
you have brought this upon yourself
you must pay now
the campus is packed
with people just like you
dressing like you do
talking like you do
hating me like you do
I head for the building
not speaking
or looking at anyone
I need silence
before I begin
breathing
closing my eyes
stroking the soft handle
feeling the blade
making sure it’s sharp
dull wont help me now
the halls flood with people
chatting and laughing
unaware of what I’m about to do
unaware of my existence
slowly I walk toward you
time seems to slow down
I know you’ve seen me
because the smirk on your face
is directed at me
and only me
i reach into my coat
and you raise a curious eyebrow
what could I possible have for you?
the blade winks at me
as I swiftly attack
you’re too shocked to defend yourself
which gives me this sweet advantage
to piece your flesh
making you scream
he waves of pain swallow you
blood covers my hands
the floor
your friends
the smell perfumes the air
and I laugh
i told you to stop
but you pushed me even more
maybe now you’ll listen
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Comments: 12
Pendragon2879 [2004-06-25 15:29:57 +0000 UTC]
Violence, huh. lol, and I am giving a speech on violence and how I think people should express their violent thoughts through non violent channels like stories and games, just as long as they don't spin over into the real world. It reminds me of this art someone on DA did where some girl was playing in some dead guys blood. She didn't kill him, but she was playing in it when the police came. Its a vicious poem. So do you like horror and macabre?
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Soul-Of-Fire [2004-06-24 04:36:33 +0000 UTC]
Brings back memories of last year when I was in Grade Ten when some guy wanted to kill me and a few of my friends, and actually attempted to do so a few times. Fuckin' psycho....
Especially the thing with the knives and the long black coat. He had all of those.
Keep it real.
~Sha~
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moldygrape In reply to Soul-Of-Fire [2004-06-24 05:27:37 +0000 UTC]
OMG ARE YOU SERIOUS?? that must've been fuckin scary. damn...what stupid fuck...
how is it you can always REALLY relate to my dark poems? lol
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moldycheesepuff [2004-06-24 04:14:55 +0000 UTC]
good poem even if it is kinda scary, lol :scared:
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moldygrape In reply to moldycheesepuff [2004-06-24 05:25:20 +0000 UTC]
lol, thanks heh, i am dark
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MoonlitShadow [2004-06-24 02:39:25 +0000 UTC]
thats a tad...uhm...dark???? i have no idea...but i wouldnt let this get around you're area or ur school...they might go ballistic on ya.
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moldygrape In reply to MoonlitShadow [2004-06-24 02:41:16 +0000 UTC]
yah i know. i would never actually bring i knife to school tho. i was just curious...
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MoonlitShadow In reply to moldygrape [2004-06-24 02:41:51 +0000 UTC]
interesting you could nail it down so well! wonderful work!
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Jack-O [2004-06-24 02:12:40 +0000 UTC]
hmm...i'de say it's a tad more than teen angst this time...heh.
not bad a little scary though
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moldygrape In reply to Jack-O [2004-06-24 02:37:39 +0000 UTC]
lol, sry...was kinda meant to be messed up...but thanks anyway
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Jack-O In reply to moldygrape [2004-06-24 02:38:37 +0000 UTC]
Yeah, I got that part...lol You're welcome
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