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moldygrape — save me
Published: 2004-06-07 01:16:11 +0000 UTC; Views: 28; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 6
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running through the rainmy face is streaming
half rain
half tears
save me
the streetlamps
dimly light the street
making it impossible to see
up ahead
or back behind me
save me
my lungs burn
making my gasp loudly
i drop to my knees
splashing water
out of a small puddle
save me
the rain soaks my back
as i lean intom the grass
closing my eyes
save me
a hand appears
helping me up
brushing the water from my eyes
making me smile
i look up
into the rising sun
and the rain stops
the clouds break
once again i begin to walk
i am saved
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Comments: 8
wow...what a poem...how come I can't write like that....?
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yeah you can. you gotta find soemthin' that means a lot to you, and write about it. doesn't have to be fab...i personally dont like the poem much. but hey thanks anyway
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lol, the ending is really cool because you are happy like people have said. For a moment, I was thinking of ways I could see myself dying. Damn, I sound so morbid right now, but it was on my mind. Really great because you become happy. I like seeing people happy.
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are you happy?
morbid is fun 
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yeah i needed a new spin on my stuff. thanks much
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