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Published: 2004-07-02 04:52:57 +0000 UTC; Views: 135; Favourites: 2; Downloads: 12
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It wraps its fingers around your neckSlamming you hard
Up against the wall
And it laughs as you scream
Who is this monster?
It can see the fear in your eyes
It knows you’re helpless
You can’t get away
Its grip is so strong
It wants to make you bleed
All it takes is one hit
And slowly your sweet blood
Pours from your defenseless body
Its eyes widen with pleasure
“So you do bleed…”
With one still holding you down
It takes the blood
And wipes it on the wall
Writing
It only takes three words:
CAN’T CATCH ME
It breaks into a run
Swiftly turning the corner
Disappearing into the cool night
Leaving you to bleed
To die alone
Who is this monster?
I glance back
Waking from this trance
I know what I have done
Flashes play in my mind
Like a horror movie
Scaring me so badly
I sob
Now stuck in this deep misery
This painful reality
I am the monster
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Comments: 25
soloira [2004-08-10 17:44:13 +0000 UTC]
I had never read ur stuf, but i will from now on ITS GREAT
Some times i feel so scared of the things my mind plot
how can it tuned every single aspect
Of the one thing or person it bothers me or sadden me
Wanting destoyed longing humiliated
And then im scared of the one thing my mind likes most
Paint my suroundings
with my feelings
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fendergirl [2004-07-05 18:26:07 +0000 UTC]
I enjoyed this. I also wonder about my temper sometimes ... I guess we all do.
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mutexvoice [2004-07-05 04:02:36 +0000 UTC]
oh wow. This is good...very nice...nice indeed...I love it.
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moldygrape In reply to mutexvoice [2004-07-05 04:03:14 +0000 UTC]
lol you always have that little blue guy in ur comments...
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mutexvoice In reply to moldygrape [2004-07-05 04:15:35 +0000 UTC]
hah! really? I dunno. I should add him to my sig then. lol.
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moldygrape In reply to mutexvoice [2004-07-05 04:20:49 +0000 UTC]
there he is again! ahahaha so awesome. he's like ur trademark.
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mutexvoice In reply to moldygrape [2004-07-05 04:25:26 +0000 UTC]
lol. haha! I dunno who made this little blue man, but it's just a thing I like to put. He's so awesome and I thank the person who made...this blue ball thing..>
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mutexvoice In reply to mutexvoice [2004-07-05 04:31:15 +0000 UTC]
I have no idea what gender this blue thing is...oh wait. i know! it's the "blue gender" haha! anime series...lol
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moldygrape In reply to mutexvoice [2004-07-05 04:26:15 +0000 UTC]
lol, yes he is awesome...is it a he? or a she? *hmmm*
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DarkRockFaerie [2004-07-02 20:01:18 +0000 UTC]
I'm sooooo glad I'm watching you!! Your work is so damn strong! And full emotions, which I really like to see!!! I love this one.....
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moldygrape In reply to DarkRockFaerie [2004-07-02 23:28:49 +0000 UTC]
thank yeh thank yeh!! omg, i'm so happy you like it lol, ur ducks are awesome
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Jack-O [2004-07-02 14:53:13 +0000 UTC]
Sometimes when I wake up in the morning, after I had a bad nightmare, I look in the mirror, and I think "damn homie! whatta monster!"
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moldygrape In reply to rntrnt [2004-07-02 07:16:45 +0000 UTC]
thanks.
an i luv yeh for tha
you never told meh why ur sad.
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rntrnt In reply to moldygrape [2004-07-02 07:21:40 +0000 UTC]
lol. yea i know, you dont want to know.
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moldygrape In reply to rntrnt [2004-07-02 07:22:27 +0000 UTC]
YES I DOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO! eh...
wait a sec...ur 17 an ur already in college...??!!
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rntrnt In reply to moldygrape [2004-07-02 07:25:19 +0000 UTC]
yep, i started last year! its not a strange thing...is it?
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moldygrape In reply to rntrnt [2004-07-02 07:27:30 +0000 UTC]
...well...here ppl start college when they're 18 at the YOUNGEST...damn...*scratches head*
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rntrnt In reply to moldygrape [2004-07-02 16:12:28 +0000 UTC]
lol, well here you can start at 16, someplaces can even take you in if your 14! some of my friends did that at school! i wish i had of aswell.
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moldygrape In reply to rntrnt [2004-07-02 18:06:28 +0000 UTC]
eh, lucky...i have ter wait...gonna be hell...
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subtlenuances [2004-07-02 05:11:20 +0000 UTC]
Intense.
I know what you mean about going into a trance sort of state.
The batheroom door has seen many a knife stabbing through it, in those rare occassions when I totally lose it and go "temporarily insane".
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moldygrape In reply to subtlenuances [2004-07-02 05:12:43 +0000 UTC]
mm, yes. a sad experiance.
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