fendergirl [2004-08-10 02:08:44 +0000 UTC]

I liked this poem. I like the Twist your head on right line. Interesting ...

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subtlenuances [2004-08-06 08:37:28 +0000 UTC]

Intense! Especially the last line.....very good though!

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abandonedpyro [2004-08-06 04:50:04 +0000 UTC]

sad but true...i can relate

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mutexvoice [2004-08-05 19:15:39 +0000 UTC]

that's coool...It's interesting.

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Pendragon2879 [2004-08-05 05:00:24 +0000 UTC]

Become happy damn it! You gotta be happy sometime!

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eysymuha [2004-08-04 17:27:06 +0000 UTC]

haunting almost. Really good though good job!

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DarkRockFaerie [2004-08-04 10:12:45 +0000 UTC]

Meh. I like it, but reminds me of something I did........ hhmmmm.

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Soul-Of-Fire [2004-08-04 04:28:22 +0000 UTC]

I can relate to this from past experiences. Sucks. Take care of yourself, damn you
Keep it real.
~Sha~

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Jack-O [2004-08-04 02:40:06 +0000 UTC]

so emotional :tear: i like it

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BittersweetLuna [2004-08-04 02:40:02 +0000 UTC]

Yeah, I'm feelin' you, too. Humans are pathetic...I hate bein' one, myself. I hug you now

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moldycheesepuff [2004-08-04 02:35:13 +0000 UTC]

i know this feeling.... very good great poem even if it is sad

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