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Published: 2004-07-06 13:51:03 +0000 UTC; Views: 42; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 11
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in these dark waters i layawaiting for the beast to strike
eat me alive
and prove them wrong
of course there's a monster lurking here
in these murky waters i am lifeless
slowly feeling my heat drain
and my eyes begin to get heavy
so tired...
i'm a perfect target
"come and eat me"
i say softly
which is as loud as i can
i feel so weak
and so tired...
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I love this.... its just so haunting, and dark, just waiting for something below to take you away...... love it!
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Heh heh....evil wicked monsta's....oO *looks* ee!! *runs*
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lol! haha! I thought that too after I watched The Texas Chainsaw Masacre...
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its crazy...i swear to god i thought there was an axe murderer in my closet for the LONGEST time....fuckin scary.
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If the beast is your fear can your fear them make him real?
The only thing to fear is fear itself, B.S. The only thing to fear is whatever fear is too you. In your case the beast. Which we all have our own little or big beast in our lifes which we fear.
Young and old we all have them. I also hate the water and swimming alone but at the same time I love giong under water and going completely limp and lifeless and sitting at the bottom of the pool till I ran out of breath and even then I stay there till I am almost done for. And I reamin calm the whole time. It deosnt phase me but rather puts me in extasy.
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really? ur ecstacy...thats awesome. i do agree on the going limp part. i donno, i like to watch people swimming above me n stuff. and i always think, "you know i could drown right now...people would think it was an accident. i could find out if there is a heaven or hell..." but in the end i strugle to the surface and breathe...
thanks for the comment 
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Stanza one, line four: "tehm", and line five: "there's" - might as well be perfect.
Stanza two, line seven: "sat" - should this be "say"?
Did you get eaten at all in the end?
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...i never do...
*makes corrections*
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Such a shame, for the beasts that is.
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lol, i wouldn't think of myself as tasty...
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