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Published: 2004-06-11 03:37:55 +0000 UTC; Views: 16; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 5
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Avi was hopelessly pinned to her matress. Her fathers massive body was crushing the air out of her lungs. She tried to sqirm away from him, out of his grip, and in return got a hand wrapped around her throat."Oh my God, you are one lovely young lady," he sneered as he ripped away her top. Avi wimpered helplessly.
She tried to speak, but all that came out was a small choke. The grip around her neck tightened. Avi was now gasping for air. Her eyes rolled into the back of her head.
"Is this how you want to diw?" a small voice asked her, "I mean, what happened to women's rights? Are you just going to sit there and let him do this??" She stopped squirming, "Everone has their weaknesses. Even him."
Avi heard him grunt and she opened her eyes. There was no hand around her neck. No, now her father was working his was into her, moaning with pleasure.
Quickly, she glanced around. Since it was still dark, she could not see a thing.
"It's not or never," she thought to herself.
In one swift motion, she lunges for her night stand and grabbed something long and thin. Without giving as much as a second thought, she rammed the object at her father.
"No more!" she yelled. Avi felt it sink into something soft. She paniced. Quickly she removed the object, praying that she stabbed the matress.
Avi heard her father gasp and collapse into the floor with a heavy thud. She ran to the light switch and flicked it on.
There, in a bloodied heap, lay her maked father, dead.
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Comments: 8
punkgoddess [2004-06-12 05:44:56 +0000 UTC]
this is saddness...really...and it reminds me of me and johnahtan...i did say stop...i nearly screamed it...and i remember having to push him off too...
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Pendragon2879 [2004-06-12 00:05:51 +0000 UTC]
WEll I feel sorry for Soul of Fire like you wouldn't believe. Conflict of emotions. Saddness of the entire situation, and happiness that its over. Both emotions are fleeting. Yeah, I am gonna stop now...
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moldygrape In reply to Pendragon2879 [2004-06-12 00:44:32 +0000 UTC]
lol, no dont stop!!...
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Soul-Of-Fire [2004-06-11 19:16:08 +0000 UTC]
............I can safely say this is the first thing that's made me cry within the first two lines..........
Brings back horrid, horrid memoires.....except I didn't get to kill any of them............
....yeah, sorry about that...
Keep it real.
~Sha~
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moldygrape In reply to Soul-Of-Fire [2004-06-12 00:49:31 +0000 UTC]
*mental note* okey dokey...sorry, dont cry
dammit now ur making me cry...
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Soul-Of-Fire In reply to moldygrape [2004-06-12 02:41:41 +0000 UTC]
*lol* Sorry....I just tried to block most of that stuff out of my life, and after everything now, it's still just kinda hard to deal with. Don't apologize for anything. The story is good, by the way.
Keep it real.
~Sha~
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moldygrape In reply to Soul-Of-Fire [2004-06-12 02:50:07 +0000 UTC]
thanks. *still keeps the mental note*
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