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Published: 2004-06-02 22:45:57 +0000 UTC; Views: 25; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 7
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Description why do you do this?
you're so hateful
and relentless

the words are thrown at me
and i can't handle it

the force hits me so hard
that i can't think
my mind numbs
and my body becomes tense
with the pain

tears brim my eyes
and slowly stream
down my cheeks
dripping to the floor

but that only encourages you
oh that makes you scream
louder
stronger

i make no sound
as my face drowns
with this sadness

i touch my arm
remembering that blow i took
when you completely lost it

now you stride toward me
hand raised
ready to strike
your face half angry
half laughing

my vision blurs
when my head is whipped
to the side

thats when i run
out the door
into the cold
never to be seen again.
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Comments: 5

Pendragon2879 [2004-06-03 00:52:38 +0000 UTC]

This is powerfully written! I feel the pain, and the understanding, and weirdly, the misunderstanding. The not knowing what to do. Your work is da bomb friend. Sorry if you ever felt like this.

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moldygrape In reply to Pendragon2879 [2004-06-03 01:37:36 +0000 UTC]

thanks...but i think we all have. omg, thanks soo much..you have no idea how great it feels to get such a compliment.

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punkgoddess [2004-06-02 22:54:31 +0000 UTC]

the emotion, is so striking to the heart...I don't know what it is about this but I get sick when I read it...

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moldygrape In reply to punkgoddess [2004-06-02 22:57:35 +0000 UTC]

thanks. that was the whole point.

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punkgoddess In reply to moldygrape [2004-06-02 23:03:51 +0000 UTC]

you're welcome

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