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moldygrape — you're gonna get knocked down
Published: 2004-06-17 00:09:48 +0000 UTC; Views: 40; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 17
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what're you looking at?stop staring
i mean it
you see something you dont like?
well maybe i dont like you
and your clothes
your bitchy attitude
your stupid friends
gawking along with you
i see your glossy lips
formed into a rude smirk
with your hands in your hips
striking a models pose
i see your anorexic bodies
with bits of cloth
clinging to your bones
trying to show the "curves"
and here i am
staring back at you
with my bitchy attitude
no friends at my side
gawking along with me
you see my plain lips
no make up
just my smile at hand
my hands hanging at my sides
holding my sketchbook
filled with me
about you
about the world
and i dare to stand tall
not afraid of you anymore
you see my black clothes
loosly hanging from my body
not showing my curves
but not hiding them either
and then you turn
breaking this contest
leading the way
away from me
snorting with your nose high in the air
making me win this time
and your loosing
is making my spirits fly
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Comments: 28
Nice one. I really like this one...in a way it reminds me of myself, except for the black clothes part...well partly...the black clothes part...Highshcool is like that ain't it? Those evil people, and those other nice people...
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mmhmm *nods* high school sucks...i got plenty more time stuck in it too 
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Do you really get picked on? I get picked on, but everyday....*ish a loser...for real.*
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well...yah i do. at home and at school...people just like to fuck with me cuz i'm not like them. i have my own beleifs and crud...they just think i'm stupid. but i'm not the one that acts stupid on porpose to i got them there! lol
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lol nice going! 
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yah, i know. this is my escape...totally awesome
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Kind like a "What you see is what you get" attitude. I hate people like that... And beauty and being thin is over-rated... I don't think most people see real beauty when its staring them straight in the face. Its sad...
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YAAH I AGREE (whoops capslock ^^) i donno, i think everyone is pretty...is hollywood n advertising ppl would quit makin it seem like you gotta haffa flat tummy and rock-hard ass so be sexy...but then again, thy're greedy bastards so SHA!
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i absolutely love it! i wrote a song about something like that...maybe i'll put it up later...if im not lazy! lol
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i put a quote here cause im a dork like that
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hah, yah i know...its so easy to be lazy and i luv it too much ^^ ah well...
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Cocky vomiting bastards. They are so...nice. lol, crazy me, do you really wanna hear me say I love it, or do you want me to tell you I hate it? Decisions decisions.
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i wanna hear you say something so...*strangle* SAY SOMETHING!! the skinny prep girls at my school mooch off others for lunches...like girls beg their bfs for money so they can buy a pizza...pathetic.
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That happened at my old school I think. I don't remember because all day I was in my own world. hating this world and its people. but thats just the feelings of a loser in high school. I was a loser then, probably, no I am a loser now, but like then but more so, I just don't care any more. Don't care about the crazy bastards are the cool ones, because it has nothing to do with me, and will only inspire negative feelings about it all, and i like being happy or just content.
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yah...if i'm not sinking into my own depressive pit...its a good day ^^ and these girls have these flat stomach...but their asses are starting to pack on all the fat 
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skinny is overrated. When I see it, I feel sick. Just thinking about it makes me wanna vomit. I have been saying vomit a lot lately. Damn that family guy!
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vomit! i perfer puke...*shrug* if i were i guy, i'd prefer a curvy woman...someone who wouldn't blow away with the wind.
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It differs from person to person. It really doesn't matter as long as the attraction is there.
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yah. i could care less how they looked...as long as they were someone i could be with and now worry about my looks and just be myself...and he/she loved it...i'm happy
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yah...
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wonderful again, reminds me of evanescence "everybody's fool" wonderful work!
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i just submitted it! as "preps
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