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Published: 2004-07-01 04:02:36 +0000 UTC; Views: 24; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 8
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Lying in my bedChoking down blood
In this dim room
Reaching for something to stop this
But all I feel is air
Where am I?
The stink of death is overwhelming
Sucking the air from my lungs
Now filling them with fresh, dark blood
And the world spins
I am suffocating
A cold hand rips me apart
Tearing my skin
Eating my heart with one bite
But my scream drowns with me
And soon I am beyond feeling pain
So I lay there
Watching the blood run from my body
Like a frightened child
My vision is now tinted red
And I can see you
With your rotten grin
You wont let me go
Your revenge is so sick
Youβre so sick
Slowly fading
Leaving my distorted body
Now nothing more than fresh meat
So dead
So gone.
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Comments: 25
moldygrape In reply to MoonlitShadow [2004-07-02 03:05:02 +0000 UTC]
...i guess. just thought...mmmmm.
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DarkRockFaerie [2004-07-01 20:38:03 +0000 UTC]
I like the deepness to it, I'm gonna watch you!!!
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Jack-O [2004-07-01 14:36:57 +0000 UTC]
hmmm....sometimes your poems make me scurred...well written though
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moldygrape In reply to Jack-O [2004-07-01 18:21:32 +0000 UTC]
scurred? u a gangsta now?
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Jack-O In reply to moldygrape [2004-07-01 18:22:36 +0000 UTC]
WHAT IF I AM! WHAT! WHAT! WHAT! YOU WANNA MESS!?
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moldygrape In reply to Jack-O [2004-07-01 18:25:20 +0000 UTC]
whoo, take a chill pill. uhm, sry ur not BLACK so ur not a GANSTA.
wigger.
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Jack-O In reply to moldygrape [2004-07-01 18:25:55 +0000 UTC]
More like a jigger...
JIGGA FLY!
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moldygrape In reply to Jack-O [2004-07-01 18:31:42 +0000 UTC]
erm...no...
but how would i know? go ask Guy...i'm sure he could give yeh an answer to tha. *winky winky*
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Jack-O In reply to moldygrape [2004-07-01 18:32:38 +0000 UTC]
okie dokie...I shall ask Guy...
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moldygrape In reply to Jack-O [2004-07-01 18:33:11 +0000 UTC]
lol, tell meh what he says.
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Jack-O In reply to moldygrape [2004-07-01 18:34:31 +0000 UTC]
go look on his userpage...
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moldygrape In reply to Jack-O [2004-07-01 18:36:28 +0000 UTC]
*grin* hokay dokey. i will keep an eye out. ^^
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rntrnt [2004-07-01 13:12:53 +0000 UTC]
well i think this is fantastic. well done. how did you get so insaine? you said it runs the family...but..um...i want 2 b insaine - well more than i am at the moment!
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moldygrape In reply to rntrnt [2004-07-01 18:16:01 +0000 UTC]
thanks! lol, hrm...how am i insane...well, when you've been stuck in my house for a whole week...you kind of start to loose it. so i recommend you get no sleep and stay completely bored for...about 7 days time.
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rntrnt In reply to moldygrape [2004-07-01 22:05:06 +0000 UTC]
ahh ok! thanks for the help!
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mutexvoice [2004-07-01 06:05:53 +0000 UTC]
I like this poem...nice nice...beautiful...lovely work.. yum yum.
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moldygrape In reply to mutexvoice [2004-07-01 06:14:48 +0000 UTC]
dont eat it...it might kill you.
jk, i dont write poisonous poems...much.
hoo, i'm insane.
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Pendragon2879 [2004-07-01 05:54:08 +0000 UTC]
So awesome! wow, you make me wanna right about death! I think I will, such a great poem you wrote here!
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