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this self-bound spitehas been so abused
because I lack
the ability to feel
for the moment
that I did
was when you
weren't around
these words
could have been
a waterfall of emotion
spilling; filling; winding
yet I won't let anything
spill except
the ink drawn here.
If love is what you
long for; then
I am a statue
completely lacking
in the ability
of feeling
as much as
this says otherwise.
I'm torn to say
and even more
to feel it
much like this paper
is to be
I had remoced those
words; emotions; feelings
from my being
and moved on to
more positive
relationships
I feel a bit faint
of my affection
because I don't
want to turn out
just like him.
a slim to none
that you'll know
whom I'm talking
about
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Comments: 1
devinjma [2006-07-14 20:56:27 +0000 UTC]
Neat! David uses lots of words that I don't know very well though. I realy like it. sounds very good, like you're telling someone off. the only thing that puzzled me was that I never read anywhere what "this self-bound spite" was, but perhaps that phrase is worded in such a way as to keep the reader/listener in wonderment? anyhow, it was interesting, and a good read. keep it David. I've seen osme of your work before, and you really think deeply.
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