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Published: 2006-04-05 09:47:14 +0000 UTC; Views: 94; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 5
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I watched you play todayI took rest and observed
the moments and clockwork
the cynically-blissful dance
yet you're so resentful
so promiscuous
in such a rush
for something you don't have
the two toned talk
with two faced words
pave the door
with silver lining
as you exercise
your gun
-die die-
shooting every threat
every man, woman & child
in such a rush.
for something you aren't to get
Aren't ever to get this
to always push away
yet feeling foul
that we won't
pull you in
you lack human nature
mr. shoot-shoot-shoot-em-up
here's my clip
with initial charges
to swiftly shoot
your sorry ass down
I promise you
it's something
you don't deserve
I promise you
it's someone
you don't deserve
I promise you
you're a blemish
a mark
I scowl at
that I long
to get rid of.
-pop-
you're temperary.
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Comments: 7
"the two toned talk/ with two faced words"
very well done illiteration.
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kik why thank you.
>>;; you know. it gets sorta hard sometimes
to come up with new work in a way
because I have to put down a new approach
each time.
>>;;; like To be Sedated.
not my best work :/
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...srry...i'm stupid... it's a very well done alliteration**
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Woah, I don't know what to say. This is pretty crazy, it's very thought provoking, but I don't think I quite understand it 
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lol. perhaps I could tell you in a note what it applies to.
but it's pretty simple.
and it makes sense.
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Cool, I'd be interested in hearing,
I promise you
it's something
you don't deserve,
I promise you
it's someone
you don't deserve
Those lines are awsome, they get stuck in my head.
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Ah I ment evoking not provoking 
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