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part one of Blake's torture------------------------------------------------------------------------
Blake's POV:
I felt nothing,saw nothing,heard nothing. Everything was so dark and vivid. Then the soft noise of boots entered my ears. I tried to move my legs but I couldn't. What was happening? Where was I? Why couldn't I move my body? Questions swarmed my mind. Then HIS voice was heard. "Blake are you awake yet? Or are you still out cold?" His voice was smooth and deep. I heard him getting closer and felt his breath near my ears. "Blakie dear." I then felt a sharp pain in my leg. My eyes shot open....I could see. But how,I-I'm blind. I was....was I? But everything was clear. Then his image descended in front of him. A hedgehog. Three tufts of red hair from his black-furred forehead. He had slick gray eyes. The hedgehog was wearing a crimson red jacket,black pants and black shoes with spikes. Aplastar the Hedgehog...my counterpart and the very guy that hated me most in the whole stinkin universe. I looked down and saw a knife in my leg,pouring crimson blood. I tried to move my hands but they were chained behind me. Aplastar grinned,guessing my thoughts. "Oh you must be wondering why you could see,well I gave you a liquid that helps the vision. But it will go away in the next few hours,plenty of time for I to finish this soon most enjoyable torture..."
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Comments: 35
SparksTheOtakuHedge In reply to mpavao7 [2012-06-06 20:58:55 +0000 UTC]
I see what you is doin'! I see dis! Torturing your cute lil' prime version!:T
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mpavao7 In reply to Shadazelover1 [2012-03-11 15:40:05 +0000 UTC]
because your a sicko! jk jk XD
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Shadazelover1 In reply to mpavao7 [2012-03-11 15:41:29 +0000 UTC]
Nah, its just cos the discription is really good.
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mpavao7 In reply to Shadazelover1 [2012-03-11 15:50:37 +0000 UTC]
oh XD here's part 2 [link]
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Shadazelover1 In reply to mpavao7 [2012-03-11 15:52:22 +0000 UTC]
Nice. You're really good at writing stories.
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mpavao7 In reply to Shadazelover1 [2012-03-11 15:53:11 +0000 UTC]
Thanks! I'm going to be an author
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Shadazelover1 In reply to mpavao7 [2012-03-11 15:54:25 +0000 UTC]
I bet you'll do really well, I mean it. ^^
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Jangofettlover [2011-11-14 01:58:49 +0000 UTC]
Very nice! This has alot of detail, for a second, I was really into this. Let me see aplastar so i can punch her in the face
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mpavao7 In reply to Jangofettlover [2011-11-14 19:46:39 +0000 UTC]
lol thanks! Aplastar is a guy and this is him [link]
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snowbelltherabbit [2011-11-14 00:19:08 +0000 UTC]
APLASTAR YOU SON OF A GUN!!! I OUGHT TO TORTURE YOU AND SEE HOW YOU LIKE IT!!!! D8<
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mpavao7 In reply to snowbelltherabbit [2011-11-14 00:20:33 +0000 UTC]
you can't do anything about it Chas
1. you don't know where they are
and
2. Aplastar can easily get away from you
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snowbelltherabbit In reply to mpavao7 [2011-11-14 00:22:05 +0000 UTC]
I hate it when people have a good point -3-
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mpavao7 In reply to snowbelltherabbit [2011-11-14 01:27:25 +0000 UTC]
but........*Teleports Aplastar here*
Aplastar: what the?
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snowbelltherabbit In reply to mpavao7 [2011-11-14 01:35:36 +0000 UTC]
D:< *slaps Aplastar across the face*
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snowbelltherabbit In reply to mpavao7 [2011-11-14 01:41:21 +0000 UTC]
there I feel better CB
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snowbelltherabbit In reply to mpavao7 [2011-11-14 01:42:54 +0000 UTC]
OWIE!!! *kicks him in between the legs*
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mpavao7 In reply to snowbelltherabbit [2011-11-14 01:51:46 +0000 UTC]
Aplastar:*dodges and disappears*
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