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Daedalus
Project: Genesis Monthly Physical and Psychoanalytical Assessment Report; Month FivePerformed By: Dr. J. Chambers; August 16, 20XX
Subject: Adora-1 (Simone-Rattica, Nicole Denise)
Pre-Existing Conditions: Dissociative Fugue Amnesia; Cyborg Prosthetic Near-Full Body Replacement
Central Cortex Energy Core Levels: Excellent
Fluid Levels: All fluid levels are 100% and operating at optimal performance
Organic-Mechanical Component Synchronization: Optimal
Organic Brainwave Activity: Slightly Abnormal
Onboard Neural Data Processor and Cerebral Implants: Optimal
Bionic Ocular Implants/HUD: Optimal
Bionic Audio Receptors and Internal Radar Implants: Optimal
Nanomachine Cellular Regeneration Activity: Optimal
Bio-synthetic Muscle Tissues and Fibers: Optimal
Upgrades Needed: None; Adora-1’s cybernetic systems are up to date and functioning at optimal levels
Overall Condition of Subject: Excellent
Doctor’s Comments/Observations: Since the last assessment, I have noticed that Adora-1 spends a lot of time staring into the mirror at herself. I asked her in our most recent personality rehabilitation therapy session why that is and she responded that she’s trying to remember her former life before we found her nearly dead. She has been increasingly able to remember bits and pieces of her past; however there has been no major breakthrough of her regaining her full memory or even large chunks of her memories. As I stated in my last entry, with the amount of her original organic brain that is missing along with the retroactive scans that has proven the damaged caused by the Sataria Daemon’s programming, there is a very slim chance that she will ever regain her memories one-hundred percent. Yet I am being optimistic that it will return and I will continue to do everything in my abilities to help this poor woman discover just who she really is.
Unfortunately, we don’t have much to go on as to just who Nikki Simone-Rattica was. All that we can tell is that she was a supersoldier in the military and had risen to the rank of Major Lieutenant at the time of her assimilation nine years ago at the hand of the Sataria Daemon. Being that she was both high ranking military personnel and a part of the supersoldier program, much of her info is classified. We don’t know where she’s from or any of her next-of-kin to notify, and with the recent happenings of the Entity’s wave of terror and oppression who’s to say that any of her family members are even still alive?
It does seem like with each remembered occurrence that her memory is indeed returning, albeit very slowly. I have done my best in helping her remember and treating her as much as a normal human as I possibly can, considering that nearly everyone else treats her like a bio-weapon…like a machine. Ever since we discovered her human born name, I’ve made it a point to call her Nicole or Nikki whenever I address her directly instead of her cyborg designation. She finds it strange at times, as she still refers to herself as Adora-1…almost as if she doesn’t fully believe that she’s a human, or at least that she used to be. I have to constantly remind her that her humanity is indeed very real despite her lack of organics. However, she has progressed in leaps and bounds, as she has taken on quite the charming persona and at least seems to be attempting to be ‘human’ at times…she’s actually quite witty and fun when she wants to be! In the first few days after her reactivation she was rather cold, robotic, and distant to everyone. Even now there are some days where her machine side seems to be the dominate personality trait and she is a bit more logical and detached than she is when her ‘illogical’ human side is on display; however these are all normal symptoms of Dissociative Fugue Amnesia. Usually this occurs when she engages in battle and her combat and survival programming protocol has initiated itself.
With that being said, she was reformulated to be a bio-weapon at the orders of Daedalus and as much as I’d personally like to cultivate her human side, she was designed and built to be a living weapon. As for her role as Project: Genesis, she has done nothing short of exceed everyone’s expectations…including my own…as she is more powerful and efficient than I thought. Not to brag or anything, I did design her body specs to make her the ultimate cyborg bio-weapon, however that mysterious diamond-like gem that’s inside of her chest seems to amplify her cyborg body. Plus, it also seems as if Nicole’s warrior instinct kicks in when she’s engaged on a mission…her brain waves and patterns are much different than her Adora-1 combat programming, causing her to respond and react much differently and naturally than her programming predicates. I once heard a quote from a seasoned veteran soldier which I believe is the case here, “Real soldiers are born, not manufactured.” Nonetheless, she’s been awesome in helping Daedalus and Caliber to turn the tides of the ongoing war against the Sataria possessed “Matriarch” and her evil Entity.
If only I could figure out how to restore Adora-1’s memory then perhaps we could also find out more about Sataria and the Entity. I try to jog her memory about whatever she can remember of her time with them, and the only thing that she can vividly remember was the excruciating assimilation process where she was intensively transformed against her will into an Elite Drone for Sataria. That event actually causes Adora-1 to experience PTSD-like panic attacks and night terrors; there have been some nights where I had to manually deactivate her so that she could actually get some rest without experiencing horrible nightmares. I have since implanted a microchip which helps her control her thoughts to prevent those traumatic episodes from debilitating her as they do…the last thing we need is for her to have a panic attack in the middle of a battle!
All in all, Project: Genesis is a success, and Adora-1 is much more special than I initially perceived. She has given the people hope that we can indeed overthrow the Entity and rid the Earth of the Entity once and for all…that’s my hope at least! And perhaps one of these days her memory will return as close to full as possible and we can find out just who Nicole Simone-Rattica really is.
-Techna
-------------------------------------------------"Sweet dreams, close your eyes
Take a bite to my memory
Sweet dreams...this is the moment, the moment
That feels like forever
This is the end of where I begin
And it feels like forever
They say time flies down from the skies
And says never
I looked down, down
All I see is never
And all I know is all I know..."
From the song "Never" by The Roots featuring Patty Crash
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I've got Nikki fever right now!
However, I had come across the ref pic again recently and decided to take another shot at it...I like how this came out. I've been trying to get back to drawing for the fun of it rather than stress myself out too much b/c I'm trying to get the pic perfect. Sure, I want to produce a top quality drawing, yet doing that sometimes takes the fun out of it b/c I'm too worried about what others will think rather than just drawing and enjoying the process. I know her hands are jacked up, but I do like how everything else came out!
I'm STILL playing with ideas for Nikki/Adora-1's revamp. Don't know if the assessment story above will hold as canon...just wanted to flex the writing skills a bit and I thought it would be cool if I did it from the POV of a medical exam/summary.
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Comments: 19
Timmy-22222001 [2015-06-16 17:00:10 +0000 UTC]
Hot damn on the description there lad with your Nikki here lad, to be honest it sounded just like you would see and hear in a science fiction movie where they're running a deep system's check on the machine. In short, wickedly good writing up skills Marcus, for whatever they might count for coming from this crab, lol.
That as well very rich follow-up work from the fellow trying to crack into her memories, can't believe how well you work to put as much time into the scientists mind with the way they ponder, probe and even wonder about the countless anomalies like any real scientist would do.
But back to the pic already, jeez Timmy! Hats off to the very deep concept of her in her own memories and what could be trying to through her own head right now with the very well drawn zoom in to her head. Its very good atmosphere you could say the way you show off the wiring and the many electronic components that make her up just to see why there's all this talk of cyborgs, breakthroughs, and programming protocols, good show lad.
Nikki seems like a very deep character to get wrapped up in which is really what more characters need to be like. The fact you again tailor to both the look and the story behind is very impressive Marcus and have to agree with you too on the mention on how cool the pose turned out for Nikki.
Liking alot of the mesh of her own hands running along her head and the rich colors of her skin that stand out along those big shiny pieces of metal that make up the most of her body. Not to sound too weird here but I just adore those red lips of hers right now seeing them really bringing that calm expression face to life in a way, its hard to explain. o_0
But kudos to your efforts on everything else from the dark shading and tone work on the metal of her body to really make it look and feel very different from the soft tones of her skin and the shadowing done up on her face. And one last final cheers to the soft glow of the blue gem coming from her chest, don't know how to that trick yet but it just makes me feel very warm when seeing a lovely effect like that on any piece of art, bravo.
Later,
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Mr-Marcus-81 In reply to Timmy-22222001 [2015-07-10 05:42:59 +0000 UTC]
As always thanks for the in-depth comment and analysis of the story! I just wanted to do something a bit different from the usual story or narrative that often accompanies my artwork. I got the idea of her getting a comprehensive checkup of both her cyborg body as well as her organic brain and how her memories have begun to return after a period of months. (I think I went to the doctor or my counselor or something around the time when I wrote this last year, so that's where it probably came from! ) Being that my gal Techna is the one that's doing the assessment and is in charge of the maintenance of Nikki's mind, body, and overall health I thought that this would be what her formal documentation and notes of Nikki's checkup would look like! Plus, she was Nikki's friend many years ago before Nikki lost her memory!
I'm glad that you recognize and appreciate the deepness of Nikki's character. She's definitely grown to become my favorite personal character. Part of the reason why I've been doing so much character combining and changing up of things in the past few years is b/c I've been wanting to make Nikki a much deeper character. Initially she was create to be an amazing cyborg athlete, then I made her a superheroine for a bit when I was apart of several years ago. However, I came to realize that Nikki was too perfect and was very close to Mary Sue territory...so (after I combined Nikki and Sapphira into the same character for almost a year until I realized that wasn't a good idea and de-combined them back into two separate characters) I made the decision to give her more mystique and to increase the amount of cybernetics to detach her from her humanity for internal struggle's sake.
And as for the aesthetic appeal of this piece thanks for enjoying! (Especially the finer details such as the blue glow from the diamond in her chest and her skin tone!) In my mind Nikki is supposed to be naturally beautiful and I'm glad when that reads to others! When I saw the reference pic to this drawing in a magazine, I immediately knew that I just had to draw Nikki in that pose. I'm a little disappointed that this one didn't get more attention b/c I too really like how it came out and love the serene look on her face as she tries to find herself and make some sense of her life other than being a living weapon.
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Mr-Marcus-81 In reply to TheGrigoriAnime [2014-08-24 21:49:04 +0000 UTC]
Thanks! There may just be a little GITS inspiration in my work, as well as Battle Angel Alita and Robocop!
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LETMESEEBEUTY [2014-08-21 13:49:04 +0000 UTC]
I hope she finds out who she was so she can move on
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Mr-Marcus-81 In reply to LETMESEEBEUTY [2014-08-22 01:47:17 +0000 UTC]
Thanks! I hope so also; she's got a big battle already to deal with against the evil Entity! Her own private war within her mind is almost as challenging!
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LETMESEEBEUTY In reply to Mr-Marcus-81 [2014-08-29 17:25:21 +0000 UTC]
I hope someone helps her
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Mr-Marcus-81 In reply to robogirls [2014-08-22 01:45:18 +0000 UTC]
Thanks!
Question: do you ever read the stories that often accompany my pics, or are you just yet for the cyber-eye candy? Just curious.
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robogirls In reply to Mr-Marcus-81 [2014-08-22 04:13:14 +0000 UTC]
i often read a paragraph but your origin storys are a bit brutal but i guess beauty rising from that is even more impressive
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Mr-Marcus-81 In reply to robogirls [2014-08-24 21:57:09 +0000 UTC]
Yeah...my stories can be a bit brutal before my gals become cyborgs; blame it on Robocop! But I'm glad that you are able to see beauty rise from the brutality. Thanks for the input!
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