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MrRemoraman β Through the Rye pg 22
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........I mean it's evil furries.
You know this ain't gonna end well
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Hello! I'm fromΒ Β
I have been doing some mini comics recently. And i actually want to do a more serious one in the close future. So i am going to try to give a comment according to my experience and knowledge about the comics :3
First of all, i am sorry that i am not be able to read the whole story since i have a busy academic life xd So about the techniques you used, it seems very interesting :3 It manages to attach reader's attention very well. The characters are detailed. I really liked that you used full dark background to make it fit with the emotion. The face expressions very well done. And lastly, the panels which arent in a square boring shape, gave the page a better look in my opinion.
The points to improve, maybe you should try the text with an automatic text style instead of just writing by your own. Im sure it will make your comic look neater and easy to understand whats going on. Also, since the webcomics are almost always published in pages, i can suggest you to keep your pages a little bit longer. Cause you know changing the page for every 5-6 panel might lose the readers attention. Other than that it's completely optional but adding at least 1 tone of shadows, makes the panels look more detailed, realistic and natural. It creates contrast and depth. And one more last thing is that, perspective of the background. Well the solution is practise xd False perspective can create confuison sometimes. But of course those are just my opinions :3 You dont have to agree with them all!
To sum up, this looks very cool! I hope you keep up the great work!!!
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Well thank you for your comments and your advice!Β I agree on the length, I probably do need to be less of a tease with things.Β Thank you so much!
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Those empty stares ....those eyes...such a Great creepy uneasy atmosphere, Great work
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Thanks my dude! I generally figure: if Al likes it, other horror folk will like it too
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That honestly compliments me and I appreciated, yet I feel that you give me too much credit 
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I try man. I know my art isnβt too great
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I disagree, u have your own style that you constantly improve and it is very effective in depicting what you want and translating the mood and emotions of the story you are telling through your art.
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That is very kind of you to say Al. I feel very inadequate as it relates to the job of drawing a webcomic. I feel it is a task for somebody much better at drawing than me
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Still gives me chills...And I know I said it before but damn...
This is cool. :3
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