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MrRemoraman β Through the Rye pg 64
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Published: 2019-06-22 17:37:45 +0000 UTC; Views: 623; Favourites: 15; Downloads: 0
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Pretty good comic page right here. You've got a good sense of shading, knowing when to make it completely black, and when to use hatching. It helps add quite a lot of difference between several parts of the image that's being presented. You've also got a pretty keen eye for detail, and are pretty slick when it comes to giving off a rather gruesome and gory look.
With that said, there are a few things I think ought to be noted. While I did praise the hatching, the direction of some lines seem to be a bit all over the place. Best example I think would be the best on the last panel. A chunk of it is done diagonally, and another part of it is done vertically, or even more angular. I think it'd be best to keep some consistency, to avoid making it look a little messy.Β
Another thing that needs to be noted is the line description on the face. If it were the muscle or meat, it would make sense, however, you're also giving a sort of melting look. Skin melts and peals off, but muscle doesn't. Since you're going with the melting, I'd actually suggest decreasing the lines on the skin.
Other than that, this is pretty good.
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Well thank you so much for your comments!Β I really appreciate any and all feedback!
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Thanks! I wasn't sure if it was done well enough.
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Dynamic, full of story and energy, I like you kept the bottom panel the biggest, those 2 zombies are awesome !!
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Gross! You do horror and abnormality very well!
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Why thank you! More to come soon
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