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Published: 2006-02-16 02:04:49 +0000 UTC; Views: 200; Favourites: 2; Downloads: 13
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XD I don't even try to think of titles.umm....during english I drew this, and then I realized that I only drew one wing, and when I tried to draw the other it looked all foonay....So I just drew some bloody stuffs like it fell off or something...heh heh....
Yeah, so...I don't like this one much...First time I ever seriously tried to draw wings...and blood. I don't like blood. It's scary.
LOTS AND LOTS AND LOTS OF CRITIQUE PLEEEEEEEASE!!
OH and ,
I'M SOOOOOOO SORRY!! I haven't started on that picture of rain yet...sorry sorry sorry!! I'll get started tonight!
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Katie!! thats so good!! the idea is super good... keep it .. try to make the blood more drippy and long red .. turning into a piece of silk material or something , i dunno.. n i think that the wing.. er where its suppoed to go should be more to the left, before the shoulder blade.
but the flowing of the dress is very smoothly drawn out, ur good at that !!
iz good!!!
wheres the other arm?
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I know i'm a little late but that is so KICK ARS!!!!
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Wow Katie! ;.;
It's all so prettyful! I loves it!
Especially the hair, it's all so defined and stuff! xD -Plays with it-
I like the pose of the person. x3
But most of all...THE FOLDS.
Eek! It's so wonderful and detailed on the clothes! I envy your fold making skills. ;.;
There is one point that I will make though...the wing kinda looks bulky (ooh, my describing skills are so great). The outline of the wing looks good but the inside of the wing should look a little smoother I guess. :[ If that makes any sense at all.
But overall, lovin' this piece! x3
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THANK YOU! And yes I agree, the wing is bulky...
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oh wow I really like this one *__*
It's so cool and somewhat melancholic 
I like the hair and the folds of her dress
lol I don't mind about you not done the drawing yet. No hurry no hurry at all X3 take your time dear
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Thanks! I actually only need to color it now
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That bench looks more like a blade.... perhaps a shadow for whatever she's sitting on would help.
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Yeah I couldn't think what to make her sitting on so I just drew a thingy....I don't know if it's a bench at all, it's just...a...shape XD
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It looks great, but since you're asking for critique, I see a couple things.
Firstly, it looks like she only has one wing... unless that was what you were going for... and that would be strange.
Second, you could practice making the wings more feathery looking... I mean, these are better than mine when I started drawing wings, but there's always room for improvement. I suggest looking at some of Daz's (raechiuu's) pictures with wings... I got some inspiration there...
ON A GOOD NOTE. I like the lack of color here, and how the blood stands out.
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yeah if you read the description I kinda said why she only has one wing....
and thank you, FINALLY someone listens when I ask for critique!! *worships*
AWESOME JOB IN THE PLAY BY THE WAY!!
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OH YEAH. Sorry I'm an idiot.
Thank you.
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Woah!!! this is soooo cool! it's really greek mytholgy-esque....
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i think it looks lovely~! the hand gesture is amazing~! and the whole pose!!!
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;-; really?? Thanks!! That's so nice!!
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