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Published: 2013-04-03 17:43:44 +0000 UTC; Views: 326; Favourites: 6; Downloads: 0
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Please let me know Ready or Not ReadyCheck out my other Black and White Photos Here
Find more People Photos Here
Help me decide If These Should Stay On Here
Or Check out my Gallery Here
***Please leave any feedback or critiques down below***
**Update 4/8/13** Cropped out the girl on the left with the bag as I've been told she is distracting Please let me know if you would like me to repost the original
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Overall, pretty nice! e.deviantart.net/emoticons/n/n⦠" width="15" height="15" alt="
However, I think the biggest problem is that this piece is a bit crowded. What I would suggest is to include more of the background on the right (unless the aforementioned 'girl with the bag' is over there. e.deviantart.net/emoticons/x/x⦠" width="15" height="15" alt="
Also, I think improving the focus and blurring out the background would really make the people stand out.
At present, most of the piece is in focus, which can be rather confusing. But if you played around with the settings of your camera, you could easily adjust the background.
Overall, however, this is a nice capture! The couple are very relaxed and casual, and the background signs were a nice touch as well.
Keep up the hard work! e.deviantart.net/emoticons/b/b⦠" width="15" height="15" alt="
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Thank you for such a helpful critique! The girl was to the left of the picture.. If I was alone and my fiancΓ© wasn't running ahead I would of spent more time on this one! But I will use your words for the future! Again thank you not enough people critique!
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You're very welcome!
Ah...the girl with the bag...ruining perfectly good pictures. 
Agreed. I try to critique when the option is available and I have time. I think it's better for everyone!
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Ah we share the same views I am going to watch you I enjoy your feed back and hope to give some back to you!
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Thanks!
Yes, that sounds like a fair trade-off.
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Hi dear,
I'm from #ProjectComment
What do I see here? Street photography!
My favourite
You have taken a very nice picture according to me..
And I love the Black and White tones because I think that they are perfect for street photography!
I would only suggest you to help the viewers to focus their attention on the scene, maybe by blurring out a little the background because in a black and white photo it can really be distracting.
I would also suggest to be more patient next time and to wait until the girls go out of the picture because they can pay the attention of the viewers away from the main subject
Have a lovely day dear
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haha ok! thank you very much!!!
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Nice Contrast! You filtered this ya? This has got to be a street mime, he's really captured wonderfully here
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Nope no filter on this one! All I did on this was crop the girl on the left she was really distracting lol. Thanks for the comment I appreciate it!!!!
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No prob! It looks excellent!
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Feel free to check out some other stuff and let me know what u think! Or even watch if you want to see more!
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I'll look through your gallery :3 See If i like anythng .
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