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Murtletheturtle — Not Yours Anymore
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Published: 2005-06-07 09:19:54 +0000 UTC; Views: 30; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 1
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cut these handstear them apart
watch the blood
as it pours
from my viens
watch my tears
as they fall
mingle with blood
watch as i
fall to the ground
fall to the hard cold floor
watch me
as i slip from conciousness
watch me
as my life slips
through your firm grasp
watch
as my innocence
burns away
crumbles to ashes
watch as i
run from you
away from the one
who raised me since birth
watch as i reject you
you dont own me anymore
i'm all grown up
you cant cuddle me anymore
leave me alone
let me be free
i like me the way i am
dont try to change me
im not your little baby anymore
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Comments: 4
yeha, i think ill change that second slip to something else one of these days, but im glad you still liked it
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very good 
"as i slip from conciousness
watch me
as my life slips"
theres something about using the word 'slip' twice that i dont really like...
but the poem is beautiful... i like the... the way its 'divided' (yeah my english sucks 
keep up the good work
daimy
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Oh i like that, a very good peice, nice work
~Raz
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