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MykeGreywolf β The Lone Rager
Published: 2014-02-15 18:04:05 +0000 UTC; Views: 7423; Favourites: 480; Downloads: 331
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Who is that masked pony? Whoever it is, this is certain: you don't want to make her angry. You're not going to love her when she's angry.
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This illustration was created for the WeLoveFine My Little Pony T-Shirt contest. If you liked it, please consider going to the contest page for it and rating it according to how you feel about it. Thank you ever so much!
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Thank you for your kind critique. I'll be the first to admit that I have a hard time withholding detail where it is not needed. In this case, I wanted to give the background a "realistic", lived-in look, as to not make the presence of the "important" elements seem forced. This explains the lit windows and the trash can (which I included as a way to tell the viewer that the street Fluttershy is entering is a back alley). You could say that I prioritized what you called "character" over the background immediate perceptibility, and decided to trust the viewer to guide themselves from the piece's outlines to the intended "hidden" features. From most of the reactions, it seems like I was successful with that. I am sorry that my approach did not resonate with your particular sensibility.
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Huh. I'm terrified. Now for critique... Straight off the bat here; everyone here has praised using the background to build up the image Flutterhulk. Rightfully so. It's very well used here, both creatively and constructively. By using the composition to help build up two images in one seamlessly, it gives more room for details to be added, such as Fluttershy (or Saddle Rager) walking down an alleyway with the cityscape in the background.
While the detail and composition are good in that area however, more attention could have been given to the border where the quality of the line work wanes, most notably on the left wing. Call it a nitpick, but detail should be applied to both the main image and the smaller details that surround it.
That aside, the originality is good in that it takes an existing character and portrays it in a way that thinks outside of the norms of design. Composition is good in coloring, lighting and shading apart from the small outer details. Impact overall is strong in that it makes you look at the image and realize how these two polar opposites have been put together in a way that makes you look twice.
Overall: Fantastic piece a.deviantart.net/avatars/f/l/f⦠" alt=" " title="fluttershylaplz" />
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Thank you so much for your critique, and for enjoying the piece. I aim to please, and to improve with every work. I will do better next time.
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Extremely creative. I like the cracks that form the rips in the Rager's suit, but I can't decide if the streetlight eyes or the sunset mane is my favorite part.
She better be careful; alleyways in the big city can be dangerous.
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Thank you for your compliments, I hope to be able to impress you again in the future.
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words cannot explain how great is this picture
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Of course they can: "not that much". See?
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I see what you did on the background... 
It amazing!!! Love it!!! 
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Thank you, I'm happy that you enjoyed it.
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Brilliant how you made the street lights like her other form's eyes.
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Those street lights sure are brilliant!
Thank you!
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I am happy to have appealed your eye! Any other body parts that you need appealed?
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her turning into flutterhulk is best moment of seasonm 4, I like how the entire pic has the shape of her monster form and the street light serves as her eyes! and the walls with the cracks in them making it lk like her dress does when those muscles bulge...dude I'm gonna watch your account from now on this is a masterpiece considering all these details
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Thank you for the watch, I hope not to disappoint you in the future.
This is certainly no masterpiece, but it's great that you liked it.
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I'm glad that you liked it.
Wait, you liked it, right?
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Ooh, love how you've used the background to fill in the silhouette somewhat!
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Thank you for you compliment and for enjoying it. I hope to be able to impress you again in the future.
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nice! Love the way you did this, with the lamp light as the eyes, looks awesome!
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Thank you for the compliments, I'm glad that you liked it. Do vote for the shirt design if you can, and if it's not too much to ask.
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Thank you, it seems that I really nailed this, and I'm really happy for it.
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I'll still love her when she's angry. Her transformation still gives me chills when I watch it. Her speech was awesome and totally spot on for her character. If they could make any spinoff of ponies, Power Ponies would be my choice!
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Keep your hopes up. Wishes do come true sometimes, after all.
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Thanks for the encouragement
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Thank you, I'm glad that you enjoyed this piece.
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This looks cool and clever especially the subtle eyes formed the the streetlight!
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It's great that you liked it, thank you.
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WOW. I didn't liked the character they choose for Flutters. But I adore this picture. Idea is great. Cracks on walls, lamp, shadows... Even sky color. This is great concept and this alone should give you first place 
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Not perfect at all, but thank you very much for your compliments, I hope to be able to impress you again.
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I hope for that too : )
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This so cool and clever.
1.The editing here and I can see the lamps as saddles eyes.
2.Its fluffing saddle ranger as Fluttershy my Waifu oWo
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YOUR waifu, you say? I beg to differ. Last time I checked, she was MY waifu.
Thank you for the kind comment.
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Nooooope shes my waifu bro XD
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This is the single greatest thing I've ever seen. Like, ever.
Take my favourite. Take my watch.
I will follow you to the ends of the earth.
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Even to the toilet? o_O
Thank you so much, I hope to be able to impress you once more.
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Thanks, I hope that I'm able to impress you again.
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THIIIIS is fantastic! wow! i really like how you used the outline of flutterhulk!
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ME TOO! Oh wait I did it, wouldn't make sense if I didn't like it.
Thank you!
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