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Published: 2009-03-22 20:56:19 +0000 UTC; Views: 324; Favourites: 6; Downloads: 5
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Push to talk, pull to playDream your life
Dream away
No respite, no reprise
Second chances
Alibis
Push to talk, pull to play
Take a chance
Make your day
No regrets, no goodbyes
The tapeβs worn
Improvise
Push to talk, pull to play
Let it be
Everyday
No concealment, no disguise
A new toy
Sensationalise
Push to talk, pull to play
Empty threats
I wonβt obey
No appeasement, no surprise
All it lacked was
Compromise
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Comments: 9
predetermined [2009-08-02 17:29:41 +0000 UTC]
I agree completely with pathunknown. Personally, I really like the contrast between the pushing and pulling as well as several other choices of vocabulary. Made it feel like there was definitely some sort of struggle in this relationship :S
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n-g-e In reply to Tar1988 [2009-03-28 22:28:50 +0000 UTC]
Thanks mate and thank you for the fave
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lifeuncommon [2009-03-23 02:42:10 +0000 UTC]
Well-written. I think it could make good song lyrics.
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n-g-e In reply to lifeuncommon [2009-03-23 10:42:57 +0000 UTC]
Thank you kind sir I think most of my poems are written that way. Fallout from the days when I used to sing and write lyrics for a band
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lifeuncommon In reply to n-g-e [2009-03-24 05:14:23 +0000 UTC]
I... don't know if I knew that about you? Awesome!
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pathunknown [2009-03-22 23:16:28 +0000 UTC]
Honestly...I love it. Like whoa. It seems as though I've read it/heard it some where before. Perhaps my unconscious mind picked up on it, before it was even fathomed.
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n-g-e In reply to pathunknown [2009-03-23 10:44:25 +0000 UTC]
Haha, thanks I don't think I've ripped anyone off, and if I have, I swear it was unintentional
Maybe cause I've used these verses on occasion in my various status messages? This one has been a WIP for quite some time, despite being a really short piece
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pathunknown In reply to n-g-e [2009-03-23 22:39:45 +0000 UTC]
No, it's not ripped off, lol. I just recognize it, as if I've heard it in my unconscious mind. It wouldn't be the first time that's happened, tbh. If only I could some how extract the music I hear in my head..
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