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I shouldn't be feeling this-this ginger-ale-bubbles-giggling-lightness
that makes me unbalanced
and leaves me too silly to make sense.
But should has very little to do with it.
Should doesn't change
the way a weight lifted off shoulders
too narrow to carry it,
as soon as the words left my fingertips.
And even though they weren't heard
by the one they were meant for,
it still felt like
rainbows-roses-long-soft-kisses
and smiles
and strawberries covered in chocolate
in someone else's fingers.
Maybe should is another one of those words
that needs to be banished from the dictionary.
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Comments: 13
nevergetfooledagain In reply to happyone52000 [2006-06-12 13:27:09 +0000 UTC]
Thank you, sweets.
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switchbladeserenade [2006-06-08 22:17:19 +0000 UTC]
Enough said. Your poems always make me smile
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nevergetfooledagain In reply to switchbladeserenade [2006-06-09 13:23:09 +0000 UTC]
Thanks.
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SixxOnyxRosez [2006-06-08 20:28:29 +0000 UTC]
There's a scene in 9 1/2 weeks where Kim Basinger feeds Mickey Rourke food out of the refrigerator while he's blindfolded.
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nevergetfooledagain In reply to SixxOnyxRosez [2006-06-08 20:30:29 +0000 UTC]
You just ruined the whole thing. I was trying to get *Rushy to show me!!
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SixxOnyxRosez In reply to nevergetfooledagain [2006-06-08 20:33:21 +0000 UTC]
Rofl.
I very much enjoyed the poem, by the way. You've no idea how great you are at poetry, stop already with the self deprecating!
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nevergetfooledagain In reply to SixxOnyxRosez [2006-06-08 20:38:52 +0000 UTC]
Eep. I really thought this one wasn't very good. The ending felt a bit too abrupt to me...and it didn't really say what I meant, although it was close. I'm pretty new to happy poetry, I guess, and it screws up my perceptions...I still think I write better when I'm writing pain. Thank you, hon...you made me feel even better than I already did, and that's saying something.
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SixxOnyxRosez In reply to nevergetfooledagain [2006-06-08 20:52:37 +0000 UTC]
I can't write happily. I have to write about malaise or sickness or depression, things like that. I thrive in those genres.
It makes me happy to make people happy.
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Rushy [2006-06-08 20:09:05 +0000 UTC]
I really like the image of the "chocolate covered strawberries in someone elses fingers" ... Very 9 1/2 weeks
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nevergetfooledagain In reply to Rushy [2006-06-08 20:11:25 +0000 UTC]
Never saw it. Perhaps you could explain it in more detail...some other time.
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Rushy In reply to nevergetfooledagain [2006-06-08 20:13:16 +0000 UTC]
Detail you say.......... My pleasure!
You have a well stocked fridge?
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nevergetfooledagain In reply to Rushy [2006-06-08 20:17:39 +0000 UTC]
For you...it will be.
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