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Hmm...now I kind of wonder if he could still talk her down if he wasn't romancing her. Great pic.
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No words needed. Such a simple pose, and yet it's powerful. Wow.
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Lovely... Very lovely end of chapter... I am really happy to see this story taking such great and wonderful proportions ;D
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Lovely work, again, but to be honest, I didn't miss another page between the previous and the next one: you ended the scene SO well with the emotive hug over Jack's shoulder!!! That last frame stretched out an eternity in my perception - it really felt like you were 'holding the frame' (in film terms) = letting the moment/emotions play out and linger on as a means to end the scene. It also 'said' a lot more than this one.
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End the scene on page 162, I mean.
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Aw, thanks my dear! I thought it was fine to end the scene here too.
Your thoughtful comment made my day, thank you so much!
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