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Here is my list of next gen OC's I'm gonna be making, I'm gonna start from the left and to the right, and I'll be doing Discord's last because he's a Draconequus, which are harder to do.This is Twinkle Shine in progress! And I gotta say, she was really fun to design. Finished!
Name:Twinkle Shine
Age:16
backstory: Twinkle is a lone child, ever since she was little she had begged her parents for a brother or a sister, but her poor parents were just to busy to ever get to it. Even though she is sixteen now, she still hopes her parents will bless her with a sibling. Twinkle earned her cutie mark from her well earned talent of magic brought down from her mother. She loves to study the works of magic, and can be a bit clumsy and crazy when an assignment comes late from her mother. Even though Twinkle loves her talent in magic, and proud for her mothers personality and charms, her father is her top idol. She had dreams as a filly of becoming the first female royal captain of the guard, and she loves having simple training with her father.
Twinkle Shine has had problems with not making enough friends, especially with her extreme love for magic and being 'captain', she still gets the love and joy of being around her parents friends foals though and even finds herself attracted to a certain pink haired Draconequus stallion. Twinkle Shine still has her down times, with her mother and father always being busy, it's hard to find time with them, which is what she cherishes the most out of all her times. When Twinkle is nervous or embarrassed she can find herself barely being able to bring out a single word and ends up not even finishing her sentence, leading to her fault of wanting to be a captain. Although if she is really determined, she can lead like a queen and always knows how to bring her friends out of trouble and always gives a helping hoof whenever she can.
Likes: Twinkle as you know loves to study and learn about new things, and when she's tasked to something, she won't stop until it's done. She loves quiet hang outs at night with her parents or friends while drinking hot spiced tea to watch the stars. When she is not with her friends, parents, or studying, she loves to spend time alone in her room and write. Her parents know of her love for writing as well, but Twinkle is too shy to reveal her stories in public, even though when her parents have read some of them and encourage her to let others read it she still feels better about keeping her creations to herself, just a secret for her to keep to herself...and her parents.
Parents backstory: After Cadence sends a hoof full of guards to Ponyville to work at Twilight's new castle, Twilight is surprised to find Flash there. A long while ago, when she last had a visit to her friends at Canterlot High, she believed her feelings for Flash were disappearing, but deep down she just knew that she couldn't be with the 'human' Flash and the pony Flash. She had grown an attachment to the human Flash and barely spent any time with the Flash in her world, so when she had to give up the human Flash to her alternate 'human' self, she felt slightly upset with the new change. She found herself in depression after the 'last' time she ever went to Canterlot high. Spike and her friends tried to get her to tell them what was wrong, but Twilight would always turn the subject away. Over time (Four Months) Twilight began to slowly recover, but after learning who was coming to be her new guards for her castle, she found herself filling with dread. She didn't think she would be able to take seeing the pony Flash everyday, just to be reminded about the 'human' Flash that she spent time with and...fell in love with...She tried to talk with Cadnece about changing Flash's place, but Cadence didn't after Twilight couldn't give her a good answer without revealing her feeling towards 'human' Flash to her. Twilight felt bad for keeping her love for that Flash a secret, but she felt foolish and stupid for ever falling in love with someone she could never be with.
After Flash's arrival with the rest of the new guards, Twilight tried her best to keep her cool and relax as she assigned them to their jobs as her new guards. Although it was difficult, Twilight found it a painful success. Over time, Flash seemed to finding an interest in her, and one day bringing back painful memories of her 'human' Flash whenever she and 'pony' Flash bump into each other and he would always catch her. He was just like her Flash...it hurt and she tried harder to keep herself away from Flash, but after her friends catch Flash giving looks at Twilight at a regular meeting, they start questioning Twilight when she immediately starts denying in a freakish tone that Flash doesn't have feeling for her. Her persistent friends ask for reasons to why she has been acting so weird, and Twilight finally tells them. Her friends felt sorry for their friend, but Rarity encouraged Twilight to give Flash a chance and to let herself heal.
Twilight put her talk with her friends, and Rarity's advice to mind, and when she could, she would have small chats with Flash, which slowly lead to lunches together (not dates). After a few weeks of this regular routine, having lunch and regular chats, Twilight believes that her fear of the pony Flash disappeared, or so she thought...Flash finally finds a way to ask Twilight on their first official date, Twilight found herself excited and happy at this news, but she still felt that old feeling of dread within her as memories of 'human' Flash came into her mind. Twilight tries to shake the thought away, and when she goes out on the date, it becomes a success, despite the rather awkward moments of their date. After the day was coming to an end, Twilight is surprised when Flash asks her to be his marefriend, which triggers memories of her past 'human' Flash when he was asking for a dance the first time she went to Canterlot High, which causing her to suddenly run away in tears, leaving Flash hopeless and clueless with what happened. Twilight retreated to her room in tears. She thought she was stupid for still thinking about her human Flash, but the pain seemed to not want to go...but it seemed in truth was that she didn't want to let go. Flash was so confused with how twilight had acted, and so concerned that after washing up a bit. He also couldn't help but feel frustrated with her, 'what was her problem? why did she seem so afraid of him?', so he decided to check on her while she had been crying in her room. Twilight is for sure surprised and embarrassed about being caught by Flash. Twilight will be shocked when he starts demanding answers for her running off like that, and Twilight tried to make him leave, but Flash was tired of it and pinned her against a wall. He didn't mean to cause her any fright, but he was in his determined mood. After some sweet comforting words and some gentle touches, Twilight gives in and has him sit with her as she tells him her long story of the love of her life. Flash was shocked at her story, as well as embarrassed, and maybe a little ashamed for his out burst earlier. He ends up apologizing to Twilight after she breaks into sobs. His warm comfort soon leads to strokes from the hoof and soon soft kisses along the mares neck and cheek, before Twilight lets go of all her fears and pain and they share a sweet, and passionate kiss.
Flash and Twilight's relationship continued on, and even though they had small common hardships, everything ended well and they continued dating for a year and a half before Flash finally proposed one night in Twilight's room on her balcony. They waited two years before they gave birth to a filly named Twinkle Shine, who changed their lives for the better...and lets end with the common phrase, 'and they lived happily ever after'...well at least for now *chuckles*
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Comments: 31
NightmareDerpy In reply to Ro994 [2015-09-13 16:10:13 +0000 UTC]
Thanks! I'm glad the backstory is good, I was scarred it wasn't very good, but everyone's saying I did good so I'm happy!
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Ro994 In reply to NightmareDerpy [2015-09-13 22:09:10 +0000 UTC]
It's actually quite similar to my own headcanon/fanfic idea, except that in mine, Adagio Dazzle brainwashes pony!Flash and tries to take over Equestria, and then the spell breaks and Flash saves Twilight from a dreadful magic beam and destroys Adagio... *deep gasp* it's a long story, actually xD I might publish it someday...
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Keithsterling [2015-09-12 17:48:37 +0000 UTC]
Ok Nightrederpy read your backstory:
It good for a first try doing a back story...overall I say b+
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NightmareDerpy In reply to Keithsterling [2015-09-12 03:27:38 +0000 UTC]
Just so you know, just added backstory! If you want to read it's in description, if you do read please tell me what you think, but go easy on me cause this is my first backstory ever.
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Pevlita In reply to SkittyLover2012 [2015-09-12 06:34:23 +0000 UTC]
I'm sick of comparing EVERY. SINGLE. Flashlight foal to Nova Star Sparkle and Starburst. These two have different manestyles, pony types, names, cutie marks, talents... Backstories, interests...
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SkittyLover2012 In reply to Pevlita [2015-09-12 16:47:44 +0000 UTC]
Same thing happened when I said that on facebook. I was just saying because the hair kinda looks the same. I know there are differences and Nightmare knows me very well. She knows I mean well. My oc is similar to her as well but is a colt. Sorry if I am "annoying." I didn't mean to be. I didn't know people where saying that about peoples ocs. I just love Starburst design but that doesn't mean I don't see the differences. I am an artist myself so I know how that could be annoying to here people saying that. I Think it is just mostly because of the color scheme that people are looking at. I also know that Nightmare never really seen any other next gens. And me saying it kinda looks like Starburst is kinda a good thing, because I love Starburst and she reminds me of her and maybe I will even like her more than Starburst.
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Pevlita In reply to SkittyLover2012 [2015-09-12 20:17:21 +0000 UTC]
Um... I'm kinda "fiery"... Uh... I'm sorry...
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NightmareDerpy In reply to SkittyLover2012 [2015-09-11 23:26:47 +0000 UTC]
Yeah kinda, only mine has a different hair style and an extra color lol! I haven't looked at any next gens yet so...I don't know what others look like...at least there are a few differences.
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SkittyLover2012 In reply to NightmareDerpy [2015-09-11 23:39:42 +0000 UTC]
You haven't seen her next gen?! She is like the most famous mlp next gen out there! She is a fantastic story line that just keeps getting bigger AND the characters are so repeatable with so many layers of characteristics.
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NightmareDerpy In reply to SkittyLover2012 [2015-09-12 03:28:03 +0000 UTC]
Just so you know, just added backstory! If you want to read it's in description, if you do read please tell me what you think, but go easy on me cause this is my first backstory ever.
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NightmareDerpy In reply to SkittyLover2012 [2015-09-11 23:54:49 +0000 UTC]
Well...I don't really look at fan made stuff but I'll probably look at her some time she sounds cool though!
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Nightrocket [2015-09-11 22:44:12 +0000 UTC]
Ooh, cool! And an awesome use of that manestyle!
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NightmareDerpy In reply to Nightrocket [2015-09-12 03:27:53 +0000 UTC]
Just so you know, just added backstory! If you want to read it's in description, if you do read please tell me what you think, but go easy on me cause this is my first backstory ever.
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Nightrocket In reply to NightmareDerpy [2015-09-12 15:17:47 +0000 UTC]
I've read it, and to be honest it's a good interpretation of what would probably happen if they decide to keep with the FlashLight thing in-show. Also, I love Twinkle Shine's character as described here. For a first backstory, I think it's really good!
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NightmareDerpy In reply to Nightrocket [2015-09-12 15:25:27 +0000 UTC]
Phew! Okay thanks for reading it! I was really scarred it completely sucked lol!
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Nightrocket In reply to NightmareDerpy [2015-09-12 16:09:13 +0000 UTC]
Nah, it's great! The story's simple, yes, but it's quite well written, and as far as I'm concerned, if the paragraph is easy to read, the story will be just fine... most of the time. lol
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NightmareDerpy In reply to Nightrocket [2015-09-12 17:12:19 +0000 UTC]
I'm glad, I will be turning it into an actual story, I have three stories I'm working on for my AU, I got one for Flashlight, I'm almost done working on the plot for FlutterCord's, as well as Blue Apples. I'm not gonna give big stories for all the main six's relationships, but just a few. Then after I'm done designing all my next gen and I got all stories down, I'll make a story for all the kids together.
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Nightrocket In reply to NightmareDerpy [2015-09-12 17:19:35 +0000 UTC]
Cool, I've got my own story for my next gen, but I still can't wait to see yours. I'm just getting around to posting more on my page, so maybe I'll get to mine soon.
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NightmareDerpy In reply to Nightrocket [2015-09-12 19:13:41 +0000 UTC]
that's cool! I'd like to read it sometime.
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Nightrocket In reply to NightmareDerpy [2015-09-12 19:23:11 +0000 UTC]
It's quite fun all by itself... but it. as while as the next gen designs are undergoing a bit of edit and finalization, but I'll post at least a bit with the character sheets when I get them down...
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