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NinjaKitteh97 — BeyBlade x Reader Chapter 6
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Chapter 6~


*snores* "uurg... what the heck is that noise?" You woke up becouse of some wierd sound. *snores* you quickly look at the side of you're bed floor. "Oh..." *Snores* Gingka was snoring. "Dang he snores so loud." You got up and got you're clothes to take a shower. "So today I'll see if Yuu and give's me a tour around the city." You then left the room.

At the Dark Nebula Organisation~

"WHERE IS SHE?!" Ryuga yelled at Doji. "Don't worry Ryuga I'll make sure we retrieve her so you can feed on her power." Doji replied wile holding his orange juice. "For you're sake you better..." Ryuga then left the room. "Hehehe... you'll regret that Ryuga." Doji silently chuckled and drank some of his juice.

Ryuga's POV~

"I don't want her power... why is that?" I thought to myself and walked down  the hallway. "Why does it anger me to know that Doji wants to hurt her?" I made my way towards the elevator. "Were have you gone __y/n__?" With those final words I left to go walk around the city.

Normal POV~

Gingka had gotten up and checked the room to see if you were there but to his dissapointment you weren't." Were is she?" Gingka asked himself and walked to his room. "Well I might as well go clean the mess I made..." he walked to his room and stood there stunned it was clean every thing was in its place and every thing he broke was replaced by something new. "Why did she so this for me?" Gingka blushed a little seeing how much you cared for him. "I'll make it up to her!" He then walked to go talk to Yuu. You finished getting dresses and walked down the hall. You were wearing a long sleved __f/c__ shirt and some __f/c__ jeans. " Yuu are you ready?" You quickly ran down the stairs and ran into a dude with long white hair tied in a pony tale he looked oddly familiar. "Oh s-sorry..."  you felt embarrased for being so clumsy. "Its quite alright __y/n__." The teen said with a grin you looked up at the boy and realised it was Tsubasa. "Oh Mi Gosh! Onii-chan!!!" You hugged him tightly and screamed like a little girl. "Woa! What's going on here?" Yuu asked with every one behind him. "You're __y/n__'s brother?!" Gingka wanted an answer. "Well were not related we just treat each other as family." Tsubasa replied wile trying to calm you down. "Yep! He's my onii-chan!!!" You hugged and cuddled into Tsubasa's chest. "How so?" Kyouya wanted to know. "Well its sorta like this."

Flash Back:
7 years ago~

Tsubasa was walking around the village looking for something to do. "You little runt hurry up and give me that bread!" Tsubasa stopped becouse of some voices he heard in an alley. "Leave me alone you big bully!" You screamed at the huge kid. Tsubasa walked towards where the noise was coming from. "Looks like she thinks she's a brave little girl. Let's teach her a lesson boys." Tsubasa looked at how you were being bullied. "Hey l-let go of me!" You were picked up and slamed into a wall. "Not until you learn to do as I say!" The dude signaled his boys to slap you're face. "HEY! BACK OFF!" Tsubasa yelled at the three teens. "Looks like we got a little hero where'sm boys... so what are you gonna do?" The leader mocked Tsubasa. "This! Let it rip!" Tsubasa launched his Eagle at the teens. "H-hey! Let's get out of here!" The leader threw you at a wall and ran away. "Are you ok?!" He ran towards you. "Why do you care? I'm just a street runt..." your bangs coverd you're eyes and you started crying. "Y'know you shouldn't believe those jerks." He said and wiped you're tears away. "Where's you're family?" You moved his hand away. "I stopped asking myself that question years ago..." you tried to get up but fell back down becouse of a sharp pain. "Hey take it easy! You just went threw a lot!" Tsubasa quickly picked you up. "Why are you even here...? Why do you act like you care about me?" You cried silently. "Well someone has to." He started to cradle you in his arms. "Thank you." You started to fall asleep in his arms. "No problem, I'm Tsubasa by the way." He smiled warmley at you. "I'm __y/n__..." you closed you're arms and said one last thing befor falling asleep. "Thank you... onii-chan."


End of flash back~

"Onii-chan~" you sang happily wile still cuddling his back. "Woah... no wonder she is so attached to you..." kyouya sounded quite amused. "Soo __y/n__ when do you wanna go for your tour around town?" Yuu asked. "We can go now." You replied letting go of Tsubasa. "Well I'll go too!" Kyouya and Gyngka said at the same time. "No I'll go with __y/n__!" They still spoke at the same time. "Hmm...?" Tsubasa shot an evil glare at both of them. "You both better not think of making a move on __y/n__! Onii-chan won't like that..." Tsubasa started being over protective. "N-no sir! We wouldent dream of it... atleast not in front of you..." Kyouya smirked playfully. "What did you say you dirty little lion!? I'm gonna get you if you dare touch here!" Tsubasa was trying his best to kill kyouya. "Go Tsubasa! You can do it!" Gingka was encouraging Tsubasa to beat Kyouya up. "Please don't hurt him onii-chan." You gave him a puppy dog face. "Uh... Fine, but if he touches you... I'm gonna beat the crud out of him... it goes for the both of you..." Tsubasa stared coldly at Gingka and Kyouya. "Thank you onii-chan... your the best!" You giggled and once again cuddled into his chest. "No problem." You then looked at Kyouya and Gingka. "See ya later guys!" Then you ran out of the B-Pit. "Hey wait for me!" Yuu ran after you. "Bye __y/n__!" Gyngka yelled.

In town

Ryuga's POV~

I was walking around town when I saw __y/n__ with Yuu. "So this is were she's been..." I quietly followed her to see were she was going. "I'll make sure you get what's coming to you..." then I dissapeard into the crowd of people.

Normal POV~

Yiu walked around the city with you. "So Yuu what do you wanna do?" You asked the young boy. "Um... how about we go for a bite? Ate you hungry?" Yuu smiled warmly at you. "Sure I'm starved!" Both of you laughed. "Ok let's go then." Yuu leaded you to a burger place. "Ok after this we go to the movies!" You said cheetfuly.

Later~

"Wow Yuu that was an awsome movie!" Yuu simply nodded in agreement. "Hey wanna get some ice cream?!" __y/n__ giggled and patted the boys head. "Sure why not?" You told Yuu and saw as he was full of joy. "Yay! Wait here I'll go get you some!" He ran to the ice cteam stand. "Ok Be car-rmf!" You couldent finish you're sentence becouse of some one covering yor mouth. "Got you __y/n__..." you recognized that voice. It was Ryuga! "Hmpf?!" You tried to get away from him but he only held you tighter. "Thought you could get away from me __y/n__?" The way he whispered in your ear scared you a little. Suddenly you were pulled into an dark alley and slammed into a wall. "H-hey!" You were about to push him out of the way but he pinned your hands to the wall. "L-let go of me!" You strugled to get out of his grasp. "You look so adorable when you squirm like that __y/n__... <3" you stopped and looked at him. "What's wrong my sweet little__y/n__?" The way he wispered in your ear gave you goosebumps and you blushed madly. "W-what do you want from me? Just leave me al-" you were interupted by how close he was to you're face.

Gyngka's POV~

I was following __y/n__ with Kyouya. So far she looked like she was having fun. "Aww she looks sooo happy with Yuu!" I said silently. "Hey what's happening?" Kyouya sounded conserned so I looked to what he was pointing at. "WHAT?!" I saw Ryuga take__y/n__ into a dark alley. "Let's go see what's going on..." I nodded and followed Kyouya only to see _y/n_ pinned againt a wall amd Ryuga about to kiss her. "HEY!!!" I shouted at Ryuga and he looked up at me rather angry for interupting him.

Too be continued~

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Comments: 18

Leila123theask [2016-10-01 14:06:10 +0000 UTC]

Kyoya you .. you.. YOU PERVERT LION ! That's why i love you so much ....please tell me that i'm not the only one that had a crush on him when i was little.l

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KittyBloom55 [2015-05-26 06:02:52 +0000 UTC]

Gingka is best cockblock. Exept for Trixie.

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ReaperInsanity [2014-08-20 17:04:19 +0000 UTC]

ONII-CHAN!! But Ryuga, GET THE HECK AWAY FROM ME! O.O'

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Happyluckygirl21 In reply to ReaperInsanity [2015-04-01 14:37:37 +0000 UTC]

Lol he only wants to be loved

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NinjaKitteh97 In reply to ReaperInsanity [2014-08-20 22:53:21 +0000 UTC]

Ahahahaha i guess your not a ryuga fan huh LOL

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AoLinkette [2014-07-08 03:52:43 +0000 UTC]

Ryuga, you have to admit... Gingka badly cockblocked you.
Hahhaha.

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cathen711 [2014-02-14 01:47:12 +0000 UTC]

I love this three boys chraying to win your heart

                                                                                     

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KiraWolf54 [2014-01-19 15:52:25 +0000 UTC]

Wait.. Tsubasa is.. my.. Brother? *ultimate happiness and reads on* Not my brother.. DANG IT!!!

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somerscare [2014-01-18 02:19:09 +0000 UTC]

I love this can't wait till the new one plz be soon

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Ryah17rose [2013-12-08 04:11:23 +0000 UTC]

Omg I LOVE this story and love triangles so please continue!!

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TheArtist113 [2013-08-22 10:55:35 +0000 UTC]

This is more like a Gingka x Kyoya x reader x ryuga story xD

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NinjaKitteh97 In reply to TheArtist113 [2013-08-25 13:57:39 +0000 UTC]

I know right XD

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SabrinaXKyoya [2013-08-21 21:24:44 +0000 UTC]

me like story! update update update!!!

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NinjaKitteh97 [2013-08-17 00:20:34 +0000 UTC]

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TheTigeressWithin [2013-08-16 23:18:09 +0000 UTC]

Umm, ok... I have no idea how to say this politely, so I'll just say this bluntly: I cannot believe that this is a GingkaXReader fanfic. After sifting through the grammar and spelling errors,  I have deduced that there is simply too much going on here. To be honest, I gave up reading this halfway through the flashback. Instead of writing a GingkaXReader fanfic, you've written an EveryoneXReader fanfic. And aside from escaping from the Dark Nebula and having every cute guy from the show fall in love with you, there's no real plot to the story. Why was (y/n) targeted by the Dark Nebula? Why is Doji going after (y/n)? Why did (y/n) and Tsubasa forget each other if they shared such a "tragic past"? (Note: according to my Mary Sue-o-meter, this fanfic is approaching unsafe levels of Mary Sue-ness.)


What I recommend is that you PLAN THINGS OUT. Go back to the drawing board, back to square one if need be, write yourself a road map, and then write out your story, and with more details. (And better spacing, please, a reader's brain can only take so many blocks of text.)


Here's a rough guide to creating a plot (with the way you write, it sounds like you need it): Story starts with Event A. Which leads to Event B. Then Events C,D, and E happen. Then we have the major climax at Event F (this is supposed to be the MOST IMPORTANT EVENT) and finally we wrap things up with Event G. A few filler chapters (chapters where nothing important happens) are permitted, but too many can disinterest the reader. THIS IS WHY YOU MUST HAVE A PLAN!


All in all, my major reaction to this was : What did I just read here?

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Tsukinochan13 [2013-08-16 04:01:53 +0000 UTC]

Awsome

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Panda-Otaku [2013-08-16 01:37:13 +0000 UTC]

But please continue.

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Panda-Otaku [2013-08-16 01:36:56 +0000 UTC]

Blughtllylutlepwujfrraaaa! Too many men wanting me. My brain is being fried.

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