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nirvanadancer — Snowman at Noon
Published: 2005-04-15 13:12:47 +0000 UTC; Views: 35; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 0
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Description Rushing waves seem to ease my soul
Feeling my foot
sink into the sand

It snowed today
White, clean, cold snow
Every snowflake different from the rest

The tide ran onto the beach
and I watched the prints of my feet
disappear, gone forever

The snow was hard
yet soft enough
for my foot to leave a print behind

Every sandcastle disappears
Every sunrise is new
Every day an empty slate

I stare at the yard
My feet are still there
as patches of grass

The seagulls and sand
take my identity

My vision is fogged
with the history of my steps

NoPast/NoFuture



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Comments: 5

learning-to-fly [2005-06-14 20:05:21 +0000 UTC]

this shouldn't be a scrap...it's good hon.

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nirvanadancer In reply to learning-to-fly [2005-06-15 00:27:09 +0000 UTC]

thanks
da made it a scrap bc they said i put it in the wrong category
but i need to fix a lot of stuff

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learning-to-fly In reply to nirvanadancer [2005-06-15 13:04:28 +0000 UTC]

well definitely let me know when it's done...can't wait to read the finished product!

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margi [2005-04-15 21:23:56 +0000 UTC]

very nice, i like this a lot.

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nirvanadancer In reply to margi [2005-04-15 22:17:56 +0000 UTC]

thanks so much!!!

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