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Published: 2007-08-27 10:17:33 +0000 UTC; Views: 181; Favourites: 3; Downloads: 1
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Cancerous clouds trickle through my esophagus,expectations rise with dust-bunny souls
Painting on confidence –
au natural is for amateurs,
and we’re all oh-so-professional here
with qualifications dangling like expensive jewelry
or baited fishhooks
over-expensive, over-compensating,
over-priced, over-stuffed, over-protected,
so over it all.
There’s a pathway paved
with glazed-over contemplation,
in the corner of impromptu revelry.
Thought-provoking epidermal mastication;
the more you think the less you know
White noise black noise, noise without color
or distinction; in your eyes, in your ears;
attention-grabbing efforts
effortless
effluent exasperation
Saturation is distraction;
muffled livelihood expelling air;
let society decode
degrade despoil destroy
Economic sociopolitical
philanthropist psychologist philosophical...
big words for little dots on the map;
pixels maiming the picture, coughed up
by the prophet in copper chains,
for 5 cents a day and dental care
(who cares he has no teeth left anyway)
Push a needle in my ear;
thoughts escape like air
from a balloon, sand
from an hourglass;
implicit implications imply
(I accidentally broke the emergency window)
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Comments: 15
IvyxenAxxe [2007-09-01 08:00:48 +0000 UTC]
I love the last stanza. There are some relly inspiring lines in here.
I know I've said it before, but you are an amazing poet ^^
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IvyxenAxxe In reply to IvyxenAxxe [2007-09-02 08:18:32 +0000 UTC]
I'm just glad I can make you happy ^^
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noiamnot In reply to IvyxenAxxe [2007-09-01 12:40:48 +0000 UTC]
Aww thanks. I'm just glad there are nice people like you who appreciate my work and are kind enough to tell me so.
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noiamnot In reply to DaGoatmaster [2007-08-30 02:22:31 +0000 UTC]
Of boredom, almost all of us, yes.
THREE FULL PAGES OF NOUGHTS AND CROSSES.
THREE.
WHOLE.
A4.
PAGES.
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noiamnot In reply to DaGoatmaster [2007-09-01 12:35:32 +0000 UTC]
HECK YES!
Bit noisier than noughts, though...
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Pax-hadassah [2007-08-27 13:08:25 +0000 UTC]
wow. as usual you have delivered another masterpiece....
how do you do it?
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Pax-hadassah In reply to noiamnot [2007-08-29 08:17:50 +0000 UTC]
interesting, interesting
stone tablet and stylus wasnt cutting it.
still i might try it out.
lol
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noiamnot In reply to LoveShotEyes [2007-08-27 11:20:11 +0000 UTC]
Thankyou, dear! It was very long when I wrote it so I rearranged the structure a bit. I like it better now. It's easier to read, for one.
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