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nostalgicstar — Defect In The Psycho-Analysis
Published: 2002-11-28 17:17:49 +0000 UTC; Views: 146; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 8
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Description A defective smile is hard to propagate
when its as if the world is crashing down.
If only it seemed possible, to cleanse my soul..
against all the improbable odds,
-but i'd die before i got that far.

Ive always been one to dislike change,
yet lately ive felt deviod of any feeling.
Still, i let the emptiness permeate
until it reaches the depth of my soul.
-is this cleansing?

Imperfection at its worst,
madly exemplified by my reflection.
Because when i look into the mirror,
im dispicable, "incurable"
-without the jewish background.

Quite analygous to the human "parasite"
that history so often speaks of..
i seem to have the same effect,
by warding everyone off
-is it my less charming disposition?

That, the answer, i hid from myself
and by all means i will never let go
of the idea that i was dubbed wrong
by many doctors misconceptions
-a result from a defect in the psycho-anylasis.
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Comments: 10

crzysweety [2003-04-03 00:16:56 +0000 UTC]

"Imperfection at its worst,
madly exemplified by my reflection.
Because when i look into the mirror,
im dispicable, "incurable"
-without the jewish background."

HELL YEAH!! dammit, your too good at this...it makes me sick...

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timrkey [2002-12-06 02:38:51 +0000 UTC]

I CANT FAVE ALL YOUR STUFF AT ONCE STOP BEING GOOD. DIE!

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silentpixie [2002-11-30 01:21:35 +0000 UTC]

big words. BIG WORDS!!!! +fav

i know you love jews

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defourthson [2002-11-29 17:06:08 +0000 UTC]

It held a lot of meaning...I couldnt quite grasp what you were saying here

Because when i look into the mirror,
im dispicable, "incurable"
-without the jewish background

Great poem

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codytheboy723 [2002-11-29 16:22:15 +0000 UTC]

This is a great poem, i love it. YOu write so well, and so meaningful too, its just great.

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arieanna [2002-11-29 06:56:47 +0000 UTC]

Irony is so ironic really, that some of our best stuff comes from some of the worst times...

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pixi33 [2002-11-28 23:39:32 +0000 UTC]

That is absolutely beautiful. Great job I wish stuff like that could always come out not just when we are feeling down

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vivec [2002-11-28 23:02:36 +0000 UTC]

awsome pome,
to bad we have to feel so bad,
to write so well.

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laurlooo [2002-11-28 21:00:07 +0000 UTC]

Damn, I love you. A nice inspiration for a poem, a nice change, and very awesome. Power to you.

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cornee [2002-11-28 18:03:02 +0000 UTC]

I love you, Donna.

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