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Published: 2006-06-09 05:01:28 +0000 UTC; Views: 620; Favourites: 5; Downloads: 205
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I experiemented a lot with this peice. Trying out different techniques, patterns, coloring, lighting, etc. I know this peice isnt amazing, not even that good imo. But I like to upload all my work onto DA for people to see, and to give me feedback. So expect much better work in the future.My evaluation of this peice . . . I didnt like any color combo I used, believe me I spent 5 hours today just messing with color. I like the shapes, theyre slightly different than my normal abstract shapes. I like the use of patterns. I like the lighting, gives it that 3D/real life look, which makes it interesting when mixed with vector. But I dont like the overall peice, I wouldnt fav this if someone else posted it.
All the shapes are made in Illustrator.
Stocks used for texture from [link]
Comments etc. are appreciated.
EDIT changed color, cuz i hated the old colors
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Comments: 17
horaciophd [2006-06-09 13:02:39 +0000 UTC]
i really apreciated the shapes and the colors
;]
but the typography its not good ;/
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dremDDl [2006-06-09 07:21:22 +0000 UTC]
hm, the colorsr arent so bad if you ask me..ive got some critique bout the piece..but its decent
nice work
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Shigeoka [2006-06-09 06:49:06 +0000 UTC]
sharpened?
but isn't it vector, so it looks fine without any touch ups.
honestly i don't like the Point of Depth.
like. the right side it feels as if the vector is "below"
but with the yellow
it feels really flat
but a really nice combination of vector and lines etc etc.
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nSite In reply to Shigeoka [2006-06-09 07:48:10 +0000 UTC]
Yes its vector, but once I transferred it over to ps and did post work some spots got really blurry, idk y, but it was too late to go back and figure out why
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nSite In reply to Shigeoka [2006-06-09 07:52:52 +0000 UTC]
Yes but that doesnt always make it jaggy, unless you resize. I usually never have issues with the shapes becoming blurry, this time i did. And I ended up oversharpening.
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1ALPHA1 [2006-06-09 05:26:36 +0000 UTC]
man i love the style but yeah low quality, but you explained why ^..
i'd like to see this redone..
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nSite In reply to 1ALPHA1 [2006-06-09 05:41:32 +0000 UTC]
yeah id like to do more peices in this similar style, this one drained me for now lol
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biophage [2006-06-09 05:15:22 +0000 UTC]
i really like the colors and composition of this but whats up with the quality?
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nSite In reply to biophage [2006-06-09 05:18:03 +0000 UTC]
its just sharpened to the max, because it decided to be blurry whenever i used color, idk the peice jus pissed me off more than anything
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Xerofour [2006-06-09 05:03:19 +0000 UTC]
lol even i played with the colors and got aggrovated haha
nice job on the shapes but the colors succ
next time we will do a better job on piccing colors lol
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