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Published: 2017-01-08 05:41:14 +0000 UTC; Views: 714; Favourites: 8; Downloads: 0
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Description Hey just wanted to post a preview of what the comic is looking like so far, I'd really like some insight so I know what to work on, this is just a really rough draft and will probably change in the finished comic
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Comments: 14

Shadow-Glassen [2017-02-16 04:18:26 +0000 UTC]

Foreboding, and darkly wise... As for the actual drawings, the arms seem to be a bit long, but I have no idea whether that's intentional or not.

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OddityIllustrations In reply to Shadow-Glassen [2017-02-16 04:21:34 +0000 UTC]

Thanks, I really wanted the opening to be dark, since a lot of the story delves into some pretty messed up stuff. I think I'll be darling the colors here in me revision, I don't know yet. As for the limb problem, I know I have a tendency to elongate limbs, growing up on Tim Burton does thatΒ , usually it's the legs though, if it's on the monster, it's intentional, if it's on the girl, then it isn't...Β 

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Shadow-Glassen In reply to OddityIllustrations [2017-02-16 04:33:33 +0000 UTC]

I see!
That would have an affect.

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OddityIllustrations In reply to Shadow-Glassen [2017-02-16 04:34:33 +0000 UTC]

I meant darkening, not darling, I really need to stop trying to do a bunch of things at once...

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Shadow-Glassen In reply to OddityIllustrations [2017-02-16 04:41:53 +0000 UTC]

Seems like you're really busy...
I'll stop bothering you. xD

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OddityIllustrations In reply to Shadow-Glassen [2017-02-16 04:44:10 +0000 UTC]

No, don't worry, that's fine, I was doing a bunch of things at once, responding to people, looking over the comic, that sort of thing.Β I'm good now. Since I haven't been on my computer for a while, a lot piled up. But my message box is all cleared out, phewΒ 

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Shadow-Glassen In reply to OddityIllustrations [2017-02-16 04:45:38 +0000 UTC]

Yeah, I deal with that sort of thing on my RP account, since I'm not on it quite as much.
There was a time I had to clear out no less than 210 notifications...

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OddityIllustrations In reply to Shadow-Glassen [2017-02-16 04:50:30 +0000 UTC]

I know they pile up so fast...Β 

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Shadow-Glassen In reply to OddityIllustrations [2017-02-16 04:51:35 +0000 UTC]

It never ends...

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OddityIllustrations In reply to Shadow-Glassen [2017-02-16 04:55:19 +0000 UTC]

never...Β 

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Shadow-Glassen In reply to OddityIllustrations [2017-02-16 04:55:49 +0000 UTC]

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Exbelion1993 [2017-01-09 05:06:42 +0000 UTC]

Oh yes.....so very true......life is soooo overrated and short u.u

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Serenity-the-Bunny [2017-01-08 06:13:59 +0000 UTC]

This is really nice, one thing I would say is that the white borders are a little distracting 'cause they cover a fair amount of the art.
idk oh and the placement of the line "One should understand this" causes me to put a break in the middle breaking the flow... idk this all could be just me.
overall I think it's wonderful ^^

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OddityIllustrations In reply to Serenity-the-Bunny [2017-01-08 06:53:33 +0000 UTC]

Okay, thank you for your inputΒ Β 

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