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A trial page for a Graphic Novel I'm working on with a friend. This is intended to tie down the style of art used within the comic. It's set in the 1660's so I was going for that old fashioned engraving/ woodcut style.Will probably upload a coloured version soon
All criticism welcome.
Pen and ink on paper.
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Comments: 5
odingraphics In reply to DemonElen [2011-08-20 21:13:38 +0000 UTC]
Thanks I'm glad it does something for you
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Gusmil [2008-05-29 19:21:46 +0000 UTC]
This is just what I think myself...
but isn't that flares a bit big?
and the second is...Did you not consider that poe should actually stand in a thrust stance?
Because...take a look...how long do you think it takes for that chipping to reach the ground?...
I mean...the person who apperantly got bashed trhough this door is about to reach the ground... So either did he hit the door rather low...or...
However It look a bit wierd...take a look the scene we got here is going to be over in like 2-3 secunds... But already Poe recovered from the trhow he made..so either his rather fast or.... so was it a hella of long throw ....which not really likley as he so close the door to...which gives ous another problem...either is this door above the ground...You can see his legs get out of the view rather high up right? But still his so close the door...and his foe which covers poe legs has almost reached the floor...
Now you either like Blehhh...
Or. liket his..Jikes stop write please!
But I just also want to add I like really how you made the wood... it look natural!
Now one last thing and its a question
How does the coal keep stay in those torchers? They like wideopen O_o...
All criticism welcome. <--- Got ya again!
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