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Published: 2007-08-21 14:52:02 +0000 UTC; Views: 131; Favourites: 6; Downloads: 0
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Description Thought Id put up a full view of Oiche^^
Done in prisma colouring pencils and inked in normal byro.

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Please tell me how I can make it better^^
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Comments: 12

Enzeru-no-hikari [2007-10-08 13:26:21 +0000 UTC]

Gah! I am SO late to comment on this! Anyway, I love the way you did the muzzle! (is that what it's called?) It shows how well you know how to create texture! ^^

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shoren18 [2007-08-23 08:01:43 +0000 UTC]

Oh, wow, great job again! You used Primas this time!

My art isn't this good, so I can't really critique it much from experience or anything, but here goes: maybe you should make the fur on her "chest" not puff out so far. Um.. and the angle of her lower back looks like it sticks out too far, or maybe it's too sharp. (?)

Any ways, awesome job again! Congrats!

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OicheWolves In reply to shoren18 [2007-08-23 12:13:53 +0000 UTC]

Thanks very much Shoren Ill keep that inmind!^^

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shoren18 In reply to OicheWolves [2007-08-23 18:19:48 +0000 UTC]

Cool, I was hoping you wouldn't take my criticism the wrong way.

Feel free to criticize my work, too, because I could really use it, coming from an artist like you.

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CooledCrimsonwolf [2007-08-22 19:07:15 +0000 UTC]

Ooooh, very nice, ^_^, the colouring is very good, and i think the back is a little too curved, but it's still REALLY good, very well done, ^_^

*gives two thumbs up* ^_^

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Queen-of-Blackness [2007-08-21 22:16:46 +0000 UTC]

When I go to do shading with colored pencils, I start off very lightly, then gradually work in darker color around anatomy and shadows. Also, if I want a really dark contrast with a shadow ill sometimes use black or a deeper color of the same kind.

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OicheWolves In reply to Queen-of-Blackness [2007-08-22 08:27:00 +0000 UTC]

Hmm good idea thank you I will try that!^^

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GrayWolfTsume [2007-08-21 20:36:46 +0000 UTC]

really good coloring job

um...maybe not have him have such a swan neck? looks a little unnatural

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confuzed614 [2007-08-21 19:17:43 +0000 UTC]

I love the coloring job, maybe with the way he's sitting he looks like he's starving, like you can see he's really skinny. Maybe try and make him look less like he hasn't eaten ^^

but other than that i love it <3

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OicheWolves In reply to confuzed614 [2007-08-21 19:21:16 +0000 UTC]

Thanks very much yes Ill try that!^^

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BlackTailwolf [2007-08-21 16:24:08 +0000 UTC]

i love the shoulder and leg anatomy!! Great coloring once again to!! Hmmm crit...lemme see...the body prolly could be a bit more fuzzy i guess =3

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OicheWolves In reply to BlackTailwolf [2007-08-21 19:25:20 +0000 UTC]

Hehe ok Ill try that!^^

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