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Published: 2004-06-15 05:33:55 +0000 UTC; Views: 219; Favourites: 2; Downloads: 16
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Description Where do I stop?
Where do I begin?
Somewhere at the top
Or somewhere within?

Sometime ago
I questioned myself
I had to let go
To hold onto my health

These dreams I have
Guide me in space
Through time I drive
To a special place

An instance of mind
With thoughts I trace
Myself I've defined
In effortless grace

Everything I've done
I've laced with my soul
Yet not everyone
Understands my goal

I may be older
Than my years let on
Still need a shoulder
That I can lean on

I am but one
In this human race
A state undone
With my soul as lace

A madness to share
The thoughts insane
With you out there
My heart is now tame
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Comments: 3

Arcirithion [2004-08-01 23:50:58 +0000 UTC]

awesome. meaningful and engaging. the message contained is good too. good as ever.

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EvilTwinSkippy [2004-06-30 02:49:03 +0000 UTC]

this is very expressive and i like the way it... speaks... if that makes sense at all...

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angel-o-death [2004-06-15 13:59:52 +0000 UTC]

(puts up sign saying SHOULDER HERE)<<<<<

*Where do I stop?
Where do I begin?
Somewhere at the top
Or somewhere within?*

.........i liked the above piece....kind of gets you thinking, but the same asnwer keeps coming back to me. there is no beginning, and there is no end......like water.....we are always coming from somewhere or going some place....not sure if that made much sense..........but the point is..we are like a cycle........a never ending circle...

anyway i'll shut up now....hehehe

its a good piece by the way

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