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Published: 2004-02-26 20:39:53 +0000 UTC; Views: 326; Favourites: 5; Downloads: 40
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Description It is the simple sentances that are most profound
Like "Life is a circle that is perfectly round"
Time is what it takes for us to comprehend
"That which we do not understand, we will in the end"

Stand up straight and tall,
Let the world behind you fall.
Take your breath, make it deep,
Release and shed all that is weak.

Keeping In Simple Sentences is the base learning tool
"Fools think they are wise, wise know they are a fool"
Perception is the key to growing your own wings
"It's not reality that's important, but how you perceive things"

Wise Is Simple Expression.
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Comments: 4

silentglaive [2004-02-27 01:33:52 +0000 UTC]

nice piece. i like your rhyming, and the simplicity. your picture that goes along with it is very nice also, with its bold lines.

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angel-o-death [2004-02-26 22:25:11 +0000 UTC]

very well done.....much truth to it

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ori [2004-02-26 20:45:43 +0000 UTC]

You have found some things very true. In the search for wisdom many feel the need to write and speak in long words, or words not often used. Once enlightment is near, though, very simple phrases are enough to convey great feeling.
Your peaceful flowing writing reflects the wisdom you have found.
If you enjoy these wise men, I suggest reading Thich Nhat Hanh. His simple use of language is simply beautiful.

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OneST8 In reply to ori [2004-02-26 21:21:58 +0000 UTC]

I will take your suggestion; find and read all that I can. A brief google tells me I will certainly like his work.

Thanks for the tip and kind words!

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