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Published: 2008-02-14 07:32:28 +0000 UTC; Views: 83; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 1
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A man walked down a darkened corridor, heart pounding faster with each step. The closer he got to his destination, the harder he breathed, creating a warm mist in the cold, damp air around his face. His hands brushed against the rough surface of the stone walls, until something wet and warm forced him to stop. The abyss that consumed the corridor blinded his blue eyes from seeing the newly found substance, so he tasted the tips of his fingers. Iron began to torment his tongue, causing him to bow down to the floor and donate the contents of his stomach to the darkness. Tears poured out from his eyes, and washed the mess off of his hands; which had been tainted with the Red Life. He began to crawl forward, and quickly bumped into the source of the blood soaked walls. This caused him to jump backwards, and onto the steal creator of death. With a gasp the man fell forward, and joined the countless others.Related content
Comments: 17
hotarujaejae [2008-02-16 19:17:45 +0000 UTC]
wow very creative indeed i should say.
the description is wonderful.
and this made me felt that i should practice my english.
XDDDDD
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OneWhoIsLoved In reply to hotarujaejae [2008-02-17 16:56:46 +0000 UTC]
Thank you... I'm glad everyone likes it so much ^^
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hotarujaejae In reply to OneWhoIsLoved [2008-02-17 17:13:32 +0000 UTC]
no prob,its really good.
XD
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artisticXexpressions [2008-02-15 01:16:29 +0000 UTC]
THE DESCRIPTION!!!!!!!!!! I <3 it much, yesyes.
very interesting way to describe vomiting. hehe. ^.~
and, well, the whole thing is really good!!!
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OneWhoIsLoved In reply to artisticXexpressions [2008-02-15 02:50:32 +0000 UTC]
thanks you ^^
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artisticXexpressions In reply to OneWhoIsLoved [2008-02-15 03:12:55 +0000 UTC]
most welcome!!!!
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Nalextia [2008-02-14 11:57:50 +0000 UTC]
wow! that's pretty damn descriptive i must say!
very nice*
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