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Published: 2012-09-19 19:48:09 +0000 UTC; Views: 365; Favourites: 22; Downloads: 4
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Description we kiss each other's palms like diamonds
like rising suns
collapsed naked in the folds
of our bodies, in the creases
of your joints i lie
barely coherent in my form
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Comments: 11

flummo [2013-03-20 14:46:33 +0000 UTC]

This made me catch my breath.

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orangecloudsraining In reply to flummo [2013-03-20 21:25:38 +0000 UTC]

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rider-on-the-storm [2012-09-21 08:06:01 +0000 UTC]

this is incredible, the picture you've put into my head.
i like the way you write, mmhmmm

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orangecloudsraining In reply to rider-on-the-storm [2012-09-22 03:12:16 +0000 UTC]

thank you very much!

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rider-on-the-storm In reply to orangecloudsraining [2012-09-24 00:59:07 +0000 UTC]

thank you! haha keep them coming and allow me to read and comment to my little hearts desire

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orangecloudsraining In reply to rider-on-the-storm [2012-09-25 21:20:41 +0000 UTC]

i'll try.

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toxic-nebulae [2012-09-21 00:18:40 +0000 UTC]

that last line is amazing

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orangecloudsraining In reply to toxic-nebulae [2012-09-22 03:12:08 +0000 UTC]

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blukitty-chan [2012-09-19 20:07:26 +0000 UTC]

This is just beautiful!! I love it

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orangecloudsraining In reply to blukitty-chan [2012-09-19 20:51:39 +0000 UTC]

thank you very much.

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blukitty-chan In reply to orangecloudsraining [2012-09-19 20:53:31 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome

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