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orangecloudsraining — a reasonable silence
Published: 2012-08-28 18:21:51 +0000 UTC; Views: 327; Favourites: 14; Downloads: 4
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Description your voice sounds like
jittering adrenaline
the whirring of construction across the street
the bright blue of the ocean
when seen only briefly
in dancing light

your voice sounds like three old men
arguing the same argument for the seven-hundred and thirty-first time
the twacking of a head of lettuce
against a brand-new counter-top
the core falling out
the reasonable silence after a storm
a bike kicking up a dusty road
emaciated children clutching a ball
a hat being turned backwards

your voice sounds like
the undoing of a marriage
a dying weed, the brief period of respite
between tantrums, the sizzling
of an excellent steak
a rubberband around a wrist
drunken men singing loudly in an alley
the formation of asteroids
the movement of the curtains
as the wind blew through me
or perhaps the wind itself
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Comments: 6

julia-caitlin [2012-09-19 15:00:00 +0000 UTC]

your writing is really something. i just love it.

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orangecloudsraining In reply to julia-caitlin [2012-09-19 19:45:34 +0000 UTC]

thank you dear. that means a lot.

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archelyxs [2012-09-12 04:14:55 +0000 UTC]

The list in the last stanza is simply stunning.

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orangecloudsraining In reply to archelyxs [2012-09-12 20:49:09 +0000 UTC]

thank you so much.

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somewhither [2012-08-29 01:37:25 +0000 UTC]

ah lovely just lovely just

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orangecloudsraining In reply to somewhither [2012-08-29 03:34:19 +0000 UTC]

thank you!

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