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Published: 2012-04-14 21:23:14 +0000 UTC; Views: 300; Favourites: 23; Downloads: 2
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Description the sun is wine,
round in my stomach,
shrill in the beaks of birds.

clover muddles your fingers,
muddles your teeth and breath
and skin. you are only
a spot in the trees.
planted among trillium,
stalks thickening your limbs,
my limbs dappled.

i taste summer
all through you.
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Comments: 13

KaitForest [2012-04-18 18:04:50 +0000 UTC]

i love your diction. it's so lovely.

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orangecloudsraining In reply to KaitForest [2012-04-18 20:53:15 +0000 UTC]

thank you! c:

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toxic-nebulae [2012-04-16 00:51:01 +0000 UTC]

well fuck.
I planned an analysis of exactly what I love about this poem, and then I decided that it's more acurately summed up by: qkuerghslgknwRweyqitjnthisisamazing

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orangecloudsraining In reply to toxic-nebulae [2012-04-16 18:07:28 +0000 UTC]

asfgheruthg

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CrimzonRose [2012-04-15 20:27:33 +0000 UTC]

This is truly amazing.

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orangecloudsraining In reply to CrimzonRose [2012-04-15 21:05:02 +0000 UTC]

thank you!

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InTheStarryNightSky [2012-04-15 03:32:28 +0000 UTC]

A lovely piece. Wonderful job.

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orangecloudsraining In reply to InTheStarryNightSky [2012-04-15 21:05:08 +0000 UTC]

thank you very much.

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InTheStarryNightSky In reply to orangecloudsraining [2012-04-16 01:43:37 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome.

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breathingglassstars [2012-04-15 02:41:50 +0000 UTC]

i could cry from the beauty of this
thank you

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orangecloudsraining In reply to breathingglassstars [2012-04-15 21:05:43 +0000 UTC]

no no, thank you.
(but also you're welcome)

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silklilies [2012-04-15 00:37:40 +0000 UTC]

why are ~you~ so perfect aw

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orangecloudsraining In reply to silklilies [2012-04-15 21:06:12 +0000 UTC]

aww.

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