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Published: 2012-06-24 07:05:01 +0000 UTC; Views: 206; Favourites: 10; Downloads: 1
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take me to where the water crushes and enfolds,crush and enfold me.
i swing from your elbows and peer
silent into the thick throng of twinges,
thick like gnats. carry me:
i am not carried.
throw the rags of my body to them,
watch as the rags of my body are torn.
sick and full am i, are they,
while you stand full and sturdy against us.
the sculpture of you looks but cannot see,
sees only with its hands and the outer
edges of its body.
carry me: i am not carried.
sounds, torn from them without effort,
flung towards the outer edges. tearing
from me, tearing in the center of me,
down the spine. i am cored. carry me.
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Comments: 11
orangecloudsraining In reply to breathingglassstars [2012-07-13 01:58:19 +0000 UTC]
thank you dear.
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sunkenveneer [2012-07-01 22:01:51 +0000 UTC]
sounds, torn from them without effort,
flung towards the outer edges. tearing
from me, tearing in the center of me,
down the spine. i am cored. carry me.
this is good
it flows beautifully
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allyestarrystarfish [2012-06-25 02:01:53 +0000 UTC]
no scrapping :l
this is way too beautiful for scrapping and everything else that everybody already said.
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orangecloudsraining In reply to allyestarrystarfish [2012-06-25 03:10:26 +0000 UTC]
fine.
thanks. :>
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KtheCard [2012-06-24 16:19:30 +0000 UTC]
please don't scrap it. its rhythm reminds me of drums and its voice is both powerful and searching and it's beautiful, it really is.
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orangecloudsraining In reply to KtheCard [2012-06-25 03:10:12 +0000 UTC]
gosh, thank you so much!
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hazeltown [2012-06-24 07:31:35 +0000 UTC]
I love the echo effect at the end.
Lovely to read.
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