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orangecloudsraining — space between cells
Published: 2012-08-20 06:01:41 +0000 UTC; Views: 168; Favourites: 8; Downloads: 1
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Description my palms hold no water
yet i am
a sack filled with rivers
a sack in the river

the looseness
of solid flesh
is unsettling
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i-am-a-bridgewalker [2012-08-21 07:11:36 +0000 UTC]

that first stanza.. damn.

love that interplay in its last two lines. (filled with rivers/in the river--limitlessness and drowning together all at once)

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orangecloudsraining In reply to i-am-a-bridgewalker [2012-08-21 20:05:03 +0000 UTC]

thank you so much.

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