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my palms hold no wateryet i am
a sack filled with rivers
a sack in the river
the looseness
of solid flesh
is unsettling
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i-am-a-bridgewalker [2012-08-21 07:11:36 +0000 UTC]
that first stanza.. damn.
love that interplay in its last two lines. (filled with rivers/in the river--limitlessness and drowning together all at once)
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orangecloudsraining In reply to i-am-a-bridgewalker [2012-08-21 20:05:03 +0000 UTC]
thank you so much.
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