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orangecloudsraining — unfocused
Published: 2012-08-21 06:49:01 +0000 UTC; Views: 243; Favourites: 12; Downloads: 3
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Description i am so imprecise a silhouette
that i waver in the midst
of swirling seas

i am so detached a soul
so unfocused and blinding
(a galaxy, loosened)
that i cloud and distort the senses,
stand between a body
and its needs

the garish outline of my necessity
grinds landscapes to a neat
unforgivable dust
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Comments: 4

rider-on-the-storm [2012-09-21 08:18:40 +0000 UTC]

...geeez, your word play is wonderful, truly.

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orangecloudsraining In reply to rider-on-the-storm [2012-09-25 21:20:04 +0000 UTC]

thank you!

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i-am-a-bridgewalker [2012-08-21 07:09:05 +0000 UTC]

"garish outline of my necessity" is a great line..

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orangecloudsraining In reply to i-am-a-bridgewalker [2012-08-21 20:03:03 +0000 UTC]

thanks!

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