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Published: 2016-01-06 03:38:39 +0000 UTC; Views: 924; Favourites: 10; Downloads: 0
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Cold bedsSleepless nights
And memories of pain
Heart aches
Stupid fights
But still the love remains
Bittersweet
It comes and goes
As we wonder what's ahead
Silent words
That no one knows
And we wonder what is said
Hidden secrets
Thoughts revealed
A frozen speck of time
Broken promises
Never filled
Stuck in this stupid rhyme
Give me a moment
I won't forget
What I've never known
Kept inside
You don't know yet
The pain I've never shown
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Comments: 10
You may not have known what you were writing about, but you are right, it makes sense to others. It hit home for me.
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I really love the structure of this poem. Rhyming can make a piece feel toooo repetitive and boring-sounding but the rhyme scheme of this one is excellent, and your word choice is super effective too. Love it!!
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Thank you ^^ I appreciate that a lot.
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this like perfectly describes my relationship right now ;-;
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Awww >.< does it really? I'm sorry
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yeah but I still really like the poem : )
thank you ^-^
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So it's a good one? 
No problemo~
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mhmm very, I like how its short and to the point, and relate-able xD
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Awesome xD haha thanks
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