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pachunka — Friggin' Heart
Published: 2003-05-14 00:58:22 +0000 UTC; Views: 371; Favourites: 2; Downloads: 36
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Confound it, Heart,I asked you
Not to fall in love;
One
Simple
Thing
..
Now what am I to do?
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Comments: 15
short and sweet...
makes me wonder what side I'm to be looking at,
the positive side, or the negative..
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i like this a whole lot... the title's adorable 
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It's interesting how it's a different poem when you look at the negative/positive side. The positive side obvious being the mellow should-be-default approach, but folk worry too much. I did a little bit. Actually I did a lot, 'round this time. Ah.
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This one is better.
There's more to this. I like how:
one
simple
thing
can stand alone and add meaning to this. Gosh I suck at comments.
I like it.
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I love to think with my heart. Yet I've stopped falling in love and practice flying in love. Falling is so down!
Yeah gimme some more.
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yeah. Wish there's a way we can put ears on our hearts? Or maybe buttons that say "Don't Love" and "Forget" and "Stop Hurting"
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This is very true!
I specificly asked my heart to please knock it off. Stop doing this...and there it goes, falling in love again. It's a such a masochistic little F'er!
Very clever, man. I like this alot
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too true! too true! we can never stop it can we? I hate it, I do.
but your poetry? that I love.
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The "one
simple
thing" really gets me. I like that part to. It's like you're pointing your finger at your heart when you say it. Like it's really in trouble. Thanks for letting us read it.
~princess kitty
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And yes, please submit the rest of them. I love shorties.
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I like the simple and helpless feeling that are reflected in the words. Reminds me of the words, "Fools fall in love".
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Short and sweet....The two last stanzas are great...."one simple thing" I love it
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