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Published: 2005-04-25 09:10:05 +0000 UTC; Views: 472; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 8
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Already defoliate head,head rosy and violet, azure in centre,
head, which hung up the tree among of foliage,
underfoot lies
like uncustomed up - country seaweed
on the edge of lawn,
round seat in fleet.
Already defoliate head round of my windows,
round your windows gladly upright,
to made place fruits, seeds
by ready on tray of saps, delicate and robustly
elements, which sleep-out.
Already lies underfoot, in the middle of steps,
lowly sight to the sky
in the middle of street,
between wheels of bus.
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Bro keep it up man, you're getting better and better.
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Thank you for encouragement.
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Yes, it is necessary always study.
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Thank you a lot. I appreciate it.
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Hello, paintertk,
thank you for translating your poem for us.
I receive two feelings from it though:
1. defoliate = without leaves ... death or dying?
2. burgeoning life! Plants and vines growing around windows, steps, into the street?
I am lost in translation?
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Thank you for notice. I know, that poem isn't translated on the whole well. In original to talks about fall (falling, dropping) of flower (blossom). Already defoliated head = blossom drop....Already drop head? Already blossom drop? Defoliate like go down blossom no leaves. Flowers fruit or of amenity trees, as cherry, cherry-tree. Is it poem about spring, which yet lasts, indeed already lose flowers. Defoliate like fall, fall to the ground, shower petals, which waft breeze, laminae falling to the earth. So that original sounds less sombrely.
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Very strong poem man, you outmatch me with your choice of words hehe, no seriously, you have agreat choice of words, I am impressed.
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Thank you a lot, is it for me honour. I like, that me was understand. Indeed certainly are in my text grammatical mistakes.
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You are really very kind and so much helpful. Highly I appreciate it. 
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Painful and beautiful.....
what a combination
I would love to read the Slovakian version...
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Wow... I have to read it again and again...Hope your mood is actually better!!
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Spring touchs on to me always positively. Thank you a lot
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Yes, is it unique, that people wherewith along north are more peaceable. In frost and snow everything kips and life is more precious. About it scarcer is awakening, which be enacted regularly each year. Has it positive influence on human character and culture. Indeed and desert is beautiful, when it is raining. And that is yet more precious and more miraculous.
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Spring in Europe is much better , and more significant for people.
Here the Spring is short and the heat comes very soon , there are israelis that use to say that "There is no Peace here because there is no Spring...."
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