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Published: 2005-04-18 11:31:27 +0000 UTC; Views: 227; Favourites: 3; Downloads: 4
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Man with dogIn middle age steps along the river
Dog yet young wait on round him
Suddenly he will jump and newly to return
After fling to the shallow whitewater
Man along steps to dog along of the waves in simple beauty
He solemnly worthy
Dog daffing in playing of waves
Man steps looks contentedly
Also dog looks contentedly and happily
Out of chain and free
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Comments: 17
Breaking bonds and remembering what it feels like to be happy.
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Suspiciously simple, but very clever. I like.
'Also dog looks contentedly and happily
Out of chain and free'
Yeah!
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Thank you. I appreciate it.
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The scene with dog is really inspired herewith French film. Belongs to my best - loved. I love that story and attendant of music. Could her listen to every day. You have admirable observation. Thank you very for it. Both of them poems originate from of my first book, which be out unfortunately only in Slovak language.
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A lovely poem, paintrtk, the man-the dog-the water---simple harmony and happiness.
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Thank you for nice comment, Sara. I'm glad you love it...
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Have you seen the movie "A Man And A Woman"? The lovers see an old man walking with his dog? I felt like I was seeing the old man and his dog again. This was a very visual poem.
You also wrote a poem about digging up earth in the country for your flowerpots in the city - I could smell the earth in that poem!
I llike these 'experiences' from another world that you send to me, paintertk!
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The scene with dog is really inspired herewith French film. Belongs to my best - loved. I love that story and attendant of music. Could her listen to every day. You have admirable observation. Thank you very for it. Both of them poems originate from of my first book, which be out unfortunately only in Slovak language.
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Loved it very much...Wish my English was "bad" as your's....
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Thank you for incitement. A little I learn read and write, that is all, indeed speak meanwhile very I don't know.
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I thank you for the chance you gave us to taste a bit of your national poetry!
And you do it very well!!
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Thank you. I like, that to you has poem liked. I appreciate very much.
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Simple and yet quite impressive.
It gives a sensation of absolute peace and lightness
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Thank you for kind words
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