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Published: 2011-01-08 00:59:06 +0000 UTC; Views: 51; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 0
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Ignorant Friend, whats wrong with you?Why are you trying to be cool?
You became something that you despise, a steryotype.
We used to be friends, you said friends to the end.
Things change, is what I hear.
I don't want you near.
We all make mistakes and run from them. And you ran the farthest.
Can't I ever be happy? You crush my dreams
You shushed me when I had to scream.
To stop the pain, you looked away.
You left me in the dark,
And then you disembarked.
Gone.
I'm alone.
But it's better this way.
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DeflatedPoppet [2011-01-15 05:01:24 +0000 UTC]
Ranting is one of the best ways for learning to express your feelings....be it in anger or not. But of course, why not, the whole point to poetry is painting an emotion with words. To capture that feeling, emotion, that very moment....in text, for others to experience and enjoy.
You did just that with this poem for me. You took me back to a moment when I felt that way about someone who sold out.
I look forward to seeing where you go, you have a lot of potential. ...and I only say it that way because I read on your other poem that you are in the 8th grade which means you will only grow and blossom, as long as your nurture your talent. ^_*
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