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paranoidfreak — Everythings Gone
Published: 2003-02-09 14:34:30 +0000 UTC; Views: 67; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 1
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I\'ve loved you for so longBut now that\'s all gone
I\'ve lost that lust
And even some trust
You try to force me to love you
It\'s something that will never happen
There\'s nothing I can do
I just had to be true
And now you hate me for that
I couldn\'t lie
It would only make things worse
But you could try
And not give me this curse
I\'ve tried to plead
And I\'ve tried to reason
There\'s nothing I can do but bleed
From my heart
And from my soul
You just can\'t seem to part
From the memories we shared
I guess I just haven\'t cared
Cared for anything lately
It\'s time for us to separate
And get rid of this hate
Just leave me alone
Don\'t try to condone
For I\'ve made up my mind
I want to leave the past behind
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like Yukari, i can also relate to this poem. it has a great flow to it when you read it....awesome job!
'I just had to be true
And now you hate me for that
I couldn\'t lie
It would only make things worse
But you could try
And not give me this curse
I\'ve tried to plead
And I\'ve tried to reason
There\'s nothing I can do but bleed
From my heart
And from my soul'
is the best section of the poem.
its great. keep writing!
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I can really relate to this poem. I think it's great. I like the structure to. Keep up the great work.
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