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Published: 2004-04-29 01:41:34 +0000 UTC; Views: 33; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 4
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Description Locked Chain

You're still controlling me
And you don't even know it.
Every chance I take,
Every thought I make
You're always there, in my mind
Torturing and struggling
Suicide isn't even an option anymore.
Too fucking lazy
I can't even move
See what you've done to me
Sulking around pouting your name
Every time I close my eyes you're all I see
Not a single moment passes
That I don't cry when I'm alone
Alone...
Always alone
Because you're never here
Yet you still control me
Never gave me the chance
When will you ever see
Fuck you
You fucked up my life
Fuck you
For causing all this strife
Fuck you
For leading me on
Fuck you
For leaving me nowhere alone
All afuckinglone
You're not even here and you still control my every function
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Comments: 14

Mysterys-Web [2004-05-02 23:51:04 +0000 UTC]

Hey there sorry iv only gotten to this now. Yeah i like this mainly cos i can relate to it it does get better though and someone else is bound to come along Take each day as it comes is my motto.

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paranoidfreak In reply to Mysterys-Web [2004-05-03 01:04:37 +0000 UTC]

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CoolKSJ [2004-05-02 17:38:12 +0000 UTC]

Very nice. I'm sorry you have to go through this.

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paranoidfreak In reply to CoolKSJ [2004-05-02 22:13:02 +0000 UTC]

Its getting better i suppose. Thank you for caring and thanks for the comment.

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CoolKSJ In reply to paranoidfreak [2004-05-02 22:21:56 +0000 UTC]

I'm glad to hear it. You're very very welcome.

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codegirl [2004-04-30 01:49:18 +0000 UTC]

ya, its always good to be able to relate to the peom, i like it a lot

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paranoidfreak In reply to codegirl [2004-04-30 02:41:39 +0000 UTC]

thank you.

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fuckbucket [2004-04-29 08:08:01 +0000 UTC]

would be an awsume song
had simular feelings towards 2 people thanks for sharing yours

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paranoidfreak In reply to fuckbucket [2004-04-29 11:23:01 +0000 UTC]

anytime. i get a lot of poems out of feelings like these, so although i hate it i guess some good comes out of it also.

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fuckbucket In reply to paranoidfreak [2004-04-29 11:45:49 +0000 UTC]

yeah its good some times to find solace in writing poetry, well it realates to all forms of art too

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Ozymandias- [2004-04-29 01:49:48 +0000 UTC]

Always alone
Because you're never here
-

I felt that was a bit redundant ... of course you're alone if he can't be there ...

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CoolKSJ In reply to Ozymandias- [2004-05-02 17:37:27 +0000 UTC]

I think the repetition is to strengthen and give the sense of overpowering loneliness.

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CoolKSJ In reply to CoolKSJ [2004-05-02 21:00:06 +0000 UTC]

Hmmm *twirls imaginary mustache*

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Ozymandias- In reply to CoolKSJ [2004-05-02 18:55:52 +0000 UTC]

makes sense, but it seems like she could go into more detail. "Alone, because [you did this]," or something?

It just seems a bit obvious, the way it's put.

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